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Please help in SC question (from OG-12, SC#105)

by aolas14 » Fri Mar 01, 2013 10:42 pm
Hi,
Please help in this SC question (from OG-12, SC#105)
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

Correct answer is option C, but what is wrong in option E? Please help me. Thanks.
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