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by GmatKiss » Sat Oct 01, 2011 7:51 pm
The legal considerations that have forced some universities to revise their affirmative action admissions programs are similar to the revisions that certain large businesses have recently made to their affirmative action hiring practices.

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b. the affirmative action hiring practices that certain large business recently have revised
c.those that have recently forced certain large businesses to revise their affirmative action hiring practices.
d.those recent revisions that have been made by certain large businesses to their affirmative action hiring practices
e. what certain large businesses have done to their affirmative action hiring practices in th recent past.

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by sl750 » Sun Oct 02, 2011 1:38 am
C

those here refers to the legal considerations that large businesses have had to consider. This sentence maintains the parallelism correctly
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by rohangupta83 » Sun Oct 02, 2011 2:48 am
The legal considerations that have forced some universities to revise their affirmative action admissions programs are similar to the revisions that certain large businesses have recently made to their affirmative action hiring practices.

c.those that have recently forced certain large businesses to revise their affirmative action hiring practices.

IMO C
Parallelism
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by 786 » Mon Oct 03, 2011 3:11 am
Yup C for parallelism .
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by aspirant2011 » Mon Oct 03, 2011 10:18 am
GmatKiss wrote:The legal considerations that have forced some universities to revise their affirmative action admissions programs are similar to the revisions that certain large businesses have recently made to their affirmative action hiring practices.

a.the revisions that certain large businesses have recently made to their affirmative action hiring practices
b. the affirmative action hiring practices that certain large business recently have revised
c.those that have recently forced certain large businesses to revise their affirmative action hiring practices.
d.those recent revisions that have been made by certain large businesses to their affirmative action hiring practices
e. what certain large businesses have done to their affirmative action hiring practices in the recent past.

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