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by ssgmatter » Fri Jun 25, 2010 7:25 am
If current trends continue, by the year 2010 carbon emissions in the United States will soar to a level more than one-third higher than were those in 1990, according to official projections.
A. will soar to a level more than one-third higher than were those
B. will soar to a level more than one-third higher than that
C. would soar to a level more than one-third higher than it was
D. would soar to a level more than one-third higher than those
E. would soar to a level more than one-third higher than they were
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by ssgmatter » Fri Jun 25, 2010 7:25 am
ssgmatter wrote:If current trends continue, by the year 2010 carbon emissions in the United States will soar to a level more than one-third higher than were those in 1990, according to official projections.
A. will soar to a level more than one-third higher than were those
B. will soar to a level more than one-third higher than that
C. would soar to a level more than one-third higher than is was
D. would soar to a level more than one-third higher than those
E. would soar to a level more than one-third higher than they were
Stuck between B and C
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by Haaress » Fri Jun 25, 2010 8:15 am
I am strongly inclined to choice B.

Here is my quick elimination strategy ...the pattern is Current - > future is acceptable.
Past - > future from the past takes a "would".

Please let me know the OA. Thanks!

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by Haaress » Fri Jun 25, 2010 8:18 am
A is incorrect because of "those" since it describes a level it must be singular. So "that" in B is correct.

Again, according to my pattern above, C, D and E are incorrect.

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by ssgmatter » Fri Jun 25, 2010 9:14 am
Haaress wrote:A is incorrect because of "those" since it describes a level it must be singular. So "that" in B is correct.

Again, according to my pattern above, C, D and E are incorrect.
Thanks dude. My reasoning matches your thoughts. Makes sense.

Let us discuss if anybody has a different thought process on this one.

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by jonathan123456 » Fri Jun 25, 2010 5:38 pm
IMO B.
Present Tense and Conditional cannot go together

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by viju9162 » Fri Jun 25, 2010 9:17 pm
"those" won't imply, hence you can eliminate A, D. You can eliminate "C" as "was" is singular.

You are left with B and E. As we are talking about the future, "will" can be used. And using "that", it signifies comparison of carbon emissions.
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by nikhilkatira » Sat Jun 26, 2010 5:42 am
ssgmatter wrote:If current trends continue, by the year 2010 carbon emissions in the United States will soar to a level more than one-third higher than were those in 1990, according to official projections.
A. will soar to a level more than one-third higher than were those
B. will soar to a level more than one-third higher than that
C. would soar to a level more than one-third higher than it was
D. would soar to a level more than one-third higher than those
E. would soar to a level more than one-third higher than they were
I am confused

Option A
If we replace 'those' with ' emissions'
If current trends continue, by the year 2010 carbon emissions in the United States will soar to a level more than one-third higher than were emissions in 1990, according to official projections.

Option B
If current trends continue, by the year 2010 carbon emissions in the United States will soar to a level more than one-third higher than level in 1990, according to official projections.

I am confused.

OA pls
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by pnk » Sat Jun 26, 2010 6:51 am
A => carbon emissions ..to a level more than ...than carbon emissions in 1990=> compares emission level in 2010 with carbon emissions in 1990, when in fact, comparison sud be btn...level in 2010 with ..level in 1990. B does that. IMO B

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by martin.jonson007 » Sat Jun 26, 2010 7:12 am
only A and B are contender...!

B is Correct...!

b'coz in A option, Level is being compard with Emissions....

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by [email protected] » Thu Dec 22, 2011 11:33 pm
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If current trends continue, by the year 2010 carbon emissions in the United States will soar to a level more than one-third higher than were those in 1990, according to official projections.
(A) will soar to a level more than one-third higher than were those
(B) will soar to a level more than one-third higher than that
(C) would soar to a level more than one-third higher than it was
(D) would soar to a level more than one-third higher than those
(E) would soar to a level more than one-third higher than they were

A word about conditionals:

If I meet her, I will tell her a story.

This is called a CONDITIONAL:

In this, we are talking about a "POSSIBLE" future - the action is NOT IMPROBABLE in future.

In this case, use the PRESENT + FUTURE (WILL) form.

So the sentence "If I meet her, I will tell her a story." Means that there is a positive possibility of my meeting her in the future...

Never use double future in such sentences:

If I WILL meet her, I WILL tell her a story. - WRONG.

But we may use the present tense in both parts if the context so demands:

If I meet her, I tell her a story.

In this case, 'if' means 'whenever'... this is correct construction.

***

If I met her, I would tell her a story.

If I were to meet her, I would tell her a story.

Were I to meet her, I would tell her a story.

All of these forms mean the same thing... there is no preference for one to another.

Even this form denotes FUTURE.

In this, we are talking about an almost "IMPOSSIBLE" future - the action is IMPROBABLE in future.

In this case, use the

PAST + WOULD form

Or If + were + would form

Or Were + Would form....

So the sentence "If I met her, I would tell her a story." Means that there is a hardly any possibility of my meeting her in the future...

SIMILARLY the sentence "If I were to meet her, I would tell her a story." Means that there is a hardly any possibility of my meeting her in the future...

Similarly the sentence "Were I to meet her, I would tell her a story." Means that there is a hardly any possibility of my meeting her in the future...

In all "wish" sentence, the above structures are used.

****

If I had met her, I would have / could have told her a story.

≡ Had I met her, I would have / could have told her a story.

This sentence is not about FUTURE... this is about PAST that could not happen...

We always use

"If + had + would / could have" form OR

"HAD + would / could have" form here

In the given sentence, we are talking about 'future' with respect to 'present'. In this case, 'will' is the correct usage. 'Would' is correct when the future is talked about with respect to 'past'. This eliminates C, D, and E.

Here the comparison is for the levels ... so 'will soar to a level more than one-third higher than that (the level) in 1990 ... brings out the correct comparison in B.

Choice A uses 'those (plural)' to refer to 'level (singular)' ... wrong. Also, A is not parallel ('were' is not parallel to any preceding word).

B: correct
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