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by Tribetiger » Wed Mar 18, 2009 11:01 am
I recently scored a [b]730[/b] on the GMAT and I am planning to apply to some top schools (HBS, Chicago, Kellog, etc.) for the fall of 2010. Please review the following information and let me know if you have any advice. Thank you in advance.

[u]General Info[/u]:

Male
24
US citizen

[u]Education[/u]:

College of William and Mary '07
BA Government; Finance minor
3.6 (Major and Overall)
Cum Laude

[u]GMAT[/u]

730 (96th percentile)
48 quant (84th percentile)
42 verbal (95th percentile)

[u]Professional Experience[/u]

2 years at a national security policy consulting firm
Summer internship with the same firm during college

I do some random community service and play on some recreational sports teams, but I plan on trying to get more involved with a volunteer organization in the near future.
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by VP_MBA_Guru » Sat Mar 21, 2009 2:14 pm
T,
Overall you have a strong background and are likely competitive for the programs below. Not much more I can tell you, as much of your application will be evaluated based on your Essays, LORs, interview, etc.

Like you said, I would try to build your ECs in time for applications. Also, consider applying in R1.

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by Tribetiger » Tue Mar 24, 2009 8:11 am
N,

Thank you for taking the time to review my profile. I'm planning on applying round 1 and I will be sure to focus on providing a compelling narrative in my essays.

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by Graham » Wed Mar 25, 2009 1:49 am
Dear Tribettiger,

Thanks for your post!

I'll echo Nikhil's thoughts in saying that you seem you have the basic components of a strong candidacy. In particular, I like the fact that your work experience should be non-traditional enough to set you apart from the field. I also think that your 730/3.6 should place you squarely in competition at the top programs.

My main questions/comments are as follows:

1) What sort of activities did you pursue in college? It's clear that you did well academically, but I'm curious to know what sort of presence you had on campus. Did you lead any clubs or student organizations? Play a sport or an instrument? As you are relatively young, many admissions committees will look at your roles on campus to get a sense of your potential in their campus environment.

2) In 'building' your XCs over the coming months, I would encourage you to proceed carefully. Ideally, anything you 'start' now will have a natural link to something you've done in the past. It's always best to pick up on an old hobby or service, rather than pull something out of thin air and expect the adcom to believe that you aren't doing it purely for the admissions process. In short, if you played the trombone in the William & Mary orchestra or tutored local high school kids via a campus volunteer program, it would be better to pick up one of those activities again (in your local community), then it would be to start something entirely new that has no connection to your past involvement.

3) What are your career goals? You offered no information about this in your post. My advice is that you think carefully about your plans for the short and long-term - as well as how the MBA will help you reach them. While one's career vision or goals cannot be measured like a GMAT result, they often play a significant role in the admissions process. Ideally your goals will allow you to weave a common thread from your past experiences, into the MBA program and beyond. It also never hurts if that path is unique - so don't underestimate the value of plotting your own course.

4) Have you been to the schools you are targeting? If you have the time, it can be a great idea to conduct your initial wave of research and campus visits in the spring, before classes end. This will give you a huge advantage over applicants who are struggling to research programs and write essays simultaneously next fall. It will also allow you to establish some contacts at your target schools - reaching out to the head of specific clubs, etc - that will prove useful when it comes to drafting school-specific content for your essays, etc. Finally, getting to know the schools now might save you time this summer in so far as you can narrow your list of targets based on fit.

Conclusion
Once again, you clearly have the basics for a competitive profile. Just be sure that you make the most of the coming months so that you can put your best foot forward in the admissions process. Feel free to send your resume to [email protected] if you would like to have a free initial chat and application planning session with one of our counselors.

Best of luck,

Graham
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by Tribetiger » Wed Mar 25, 2009 8:34 am
Graham,

Thank you for taking the time to respond to my post. I agree with many of your points and I will do my best to address them below.

1. College XCs
- Student Alumni Council: Campus-wide organization that focuses on developing relationships between current students and alumni. We generally focused on event planning, fundraising, and hosting student oriented events to prepare students for life after college. 3 years (1 year as officer on executive committee)
- Finance Academy: 2 years
- Local youth basketball coach: 3 years
- Fraternity: 4 years (3 years as officer on executive committee)
- Varsity baseball: 2 months (probably will leave this off since I quit so quickly)
- Intramural sports

2. I think you make an excellent point regarding my post-college XCs. I am probably going to focus on getting more involved with my local alumni chapter with the hopes of helping to start a chapter scholarship for current students that wish to enter public service upon graduation. Since this is possibly a long-shot, I will probably venture into something less entrepreneurial as well to make sure I have something to show if all else fails.

3. I need to give a great deal more thought to how I will respond to this question. I have a few ideas and I will try to formulate a response over the coming months so that I am prepared to answer the question on applications. I know I want to go get my MBA, but the next step is to convince schools that I need one to achieve my goals and that they stand to benefit from my presence in their program. I’ll keep your company in mind as a reference to check my thoughts on this topic in the coming months.

4. I plan on visiting schools starting this spring. I will do my best to visit while classes are in session, but some summer visits may be necessary.

Again, thank you for taking the time to review my profile.

- T