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profile evaluation request

by Biahar » Fri Nov 12, 2010 1:15 am
Hi,
I would be thankful if you give an evaluation of my profile.

I am 27 years old.
Originally from Iran but Armenian.
Immigrated to US 2 years ago.
Have a master's in tourism management concentrating in marketing form Allameh Tabatab'i school, Tehran / Iran
My short term goal is to work as a brand manager in a tourism company (Disney or airlines)
GMAT 610 (Quant 65 % , Verbal 58 % , AWA 5)
Target schools UCLA, USC, UCIrvine, NYStern

Have 5 years of fulltime experience and have worked part time during my BA
Languages: Armenian, Farsi, English, Spanish and a little German, Arabic, French

How do you see my candidacy?
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by Stacey Oyler » Wed Nov 17, 2010 10:19 am
Hi,

Thanks for your post. Your work experience to date is quite unique and will certainly help you stand out in the applicant pool. Your experience combined with your post MBA goals are logical and the adcom will clearly understand your desire for an MBA.

The one weakness I can see is your GMAT score. UCI has an average GMAT of 675, while the other schools on your list have averages above 700. I'm not sure how you prepared for the exam or how many times you've taken it, but you may wish to consider retaking it with a goal of 650+. This will certainly help strengthen your profile.

Please feel free to send you resume to [email protected] for a detailed assessment.

Regards,

Stacey
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