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by GmatKiss » Tue Aug 23, 2011 4:01 am
With cloning technology, scientists are approaching what has long been the ultimate goal of modern husbandry: achieving a consistency of quality and production in farm animals as once thought to be limited to manufactured goods.
(A) achieving a consistency of quality and production in farm animals as once thought to be
(B) achieving farm animals with a consistency of quality and production as were once thought of as
(C) achieving in farm animals a consistency of quality and production that was once thought to be
(D) achievement of farm animals whose consistency of quality and production are the same as what were once thought to bee
(E) achievement of farm animals at a consistency of quality and production once thought of as

OA: C
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by arashyazdiha » Wed Aug 24, 2011 6:40 am
in A once thought to be is could be assumed both for farm animals and achieving a consistency of bla bla bla. so it is ambiguous.
in B achieving farm animals is the focus point and is sort of distorting the meaning.
C is ok and does not have the problem mentioned in a
D it is also a distortion in the meaning, it is focusing on achievement of farm animals and not the consistency
in E again the problem is the same as in C and I think achieve of sth at is not correct.

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by aspirant2011 » Wed Aug 24, 2011 6:46 am
GmatKiss wrote:With cloning technology, scientists are approaching what has long been the ultimate goal of modern husbandry: achieving a consistency of quality and production in farm animals as once thought to be limited to manufactured goods.

(A) achieving a consistency of quality and production in farm animals as once thought to be ----- awkward
(B) achieving farm animals with a consistency of quality and production as were once thought of as ----- awkward
(C) achieving in farm animals a consistency of quality and production that was once thought to be
(D) achievement of farm animals whose consistency of quality and production are the same as what were once thought to bee ---- plural usage for consistency
(E) achievement of farm animals at a consistency of quality and production once thought of as ---- awkward

OA: C
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