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rashmi.kaushal
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Argument :-
Rating system for Electronic Games,comparing it with Film rating system mentions its flaws provides relevant suggestions to make the system work.
The Argument mentioned above talks of Rating system for Electronic Games,comparing it with Film rating system mentions its flaws provides relevant suggestions to make the system work.
This argument is well reasoned as far as its structure is concerned, as it first mentions -
Use of the rating system for electronic games, then throws light on why the system is not working and even provides suggestions for on how to make the system work.
However there is a flaw in the argument as it does not clearly elaborates the reasons for the comparison for Electronic Gaming system from Movie rating system.There can be a couple of questions that remain unanswered from the argument such as -
1.Does the Movie rating System has an external body governing it ?
2.How many new game releases happen in a year's time ?
3. Can increasing the fine for not following the rating be a workable solution for the Electronic gaming Industry ?
4.Wjy the comparison to the Movie Rating System is mentioned ?
The argument would have been perfect, if it answered all the above questions with a valid reasoning.
Rating system for Electronic Games,comparing it with Film rating system mentions its flaws provides relevant suggestions to make the system work.
The Argument mentioned above talks of Rating system for Electronic Games,comparing it with Film rating system mentions its flaws provides relevant suggestions to make the system work.
This argument is well reasoned as far as its structure is concerned, as it first mentions -
Use of the rating system for electronic games, then throws light on why the system is not working and even provides suggestions for on how to make the system work.
However there is a flaw in the argument as it does not clearly elaborates the reasons for the comparison for Electronic Gaming system from Movie rating system.There can be a couple of questions that remain unanswered from the argument such as -
1.Does the Movie rating System has an external body governing it ?
2.How many new game releases happen in a year's time ?
3. Can increasing the fine for not following the rating be a workable solution for the Electronic gaming Industry ?
4.Wjy the comparison to the Movie Rating System is mentioned ?
The argument would have been perfect, if it answered all the above questions with a valid reasoning.
