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Hi

Im looking for any comments/feedback on my existing profile and if any,scope for improvements (keeping in mind I have about 4 months till I start applying to schools)

Basic Profile

Age - 24 Yrs
GMAT - Female
From - New Delhi,India

EDUCATION

Graduation - Bachelors of Commerce( Honours ) from Delhi University. Ist Division

Post Graduation - Masters of Commerce form Delhi University

Work Experience

Alstom Projects Switzerland - 1 Yr.Procurement Internship Contract in Zurich

Alstom Projects India - 2 Yrs Cost Estimation, Manager in New Delhi;So total 3 yrs (by the time i apply 3.5 yrs)

International Exposure

One Year Work in Switzerland

One Month Training in USA

Third Language

French - Level One

Extra- Curriculars (Weak Area, Need most advice on this)

Part of the Editorial team at Alstom.

Volunteer at a Regional Society to promote education for girls.

GMAT

Still to take the test in August, Target score (and within reach) 740


Schools Im targeting..

Insead,HEC,IESE,IE,London Business School,National University of Singapore,IMD,NYU.


Any guidance on the above w.r.t to possible loopholes/weaknesses and how to address the same as well as positives to highlight will be appreciated.


Question 2) As im sure good schools (not limited to the ones in my list) receive a lot of applications from Indian candidates and as such would have developed a sort of filter to separate the 'usual Indian profile' from the ones worth pursuing.

Any handy tips on the schools I mentioned w.r.t what they look for in Indian candidates and specifically what stands out in my profile as a female Indian applicant.


Thanks for your help!!
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by Bryant@VeritasPrep » Sun Jul 01, 2012 7:46 am
Younger applicants like yourself sometimes have a tougher time demonstrating leadership achievements and potential. You should think through your experience from the perspective of how you have made and impact and inspired others to do the same. As for being Indian, you have one advantage in that you are female, since there are far more males applying to b-school than females. Here is some more advice for distinguishing yourself as an Indian applicant:

India's growing economy has created many exciting opportunities for people with the business education that will enable them to lead and manage growth there. However, to access the top business education, Indian students must first gain admission to one of the elite MBA programs. With hundreds of Indians applying to these business schools each year, how can you pull yourself out of the crowd and distinguish yourself in the eyes of the admissions committees?
First, understand what the typical Indian applicant reveals in his application. Then, differentiate your own.
The Average Indian MBA Applicant: Works for a family business
Working for a family business can be extremely educational: you earn high-level responsibility earlier, manage teams of employees, and gain perspective into the workings of the entire company. However, family businesses lack the influence and scope of larger companies, and it is difficult to compare your performance to others'.
The DIFFERENTIATED Indian MBA Applicant: Has made an impact in a bigger pond
An applicant who has proven his abilities in a family business and then applied the skills in management at a large international company is able to demonstrate that he is truly talented beyond the scope of his own family. Letters of recommendation written by impartial superiors, unlike those from family members, employees, or even clients of a family business, carry more weight in the eyes of the admissions committees and can demonstrate that you truly outperform your peers and have honestly won the recognition of senior management. The Differentiated Applicant can then illustrate his impact on this large organization in his resume, work history, and essays.
Did the marketing campaign you designed boost sales of the product by 50% within 6 weeks?
Have you earned a promotion every year or become the youngest department manager?
The Average Indian MBA Applicant: Works in India's burgeoning high-tech industry
India's high-tech sector has blossomed in the past few years as global companies have tapped the highly educated and hardworking population in India. Many of today's business school applicants have experience in that industry.
The DIFFERENTIATED Indian MBA Applicant: Has gained management experience
While your background may be in technology, you can prove to the admissions committees that you have what it takes to lead commerce in the future by demonstrating that you are leading and managing teams of employees, designing company strategy, earning promotions, and boosting your company's bottom line.
Did you identify an untapped market and lead a taskforce to create a product to tap this niche?
Do you manage 30 people, the largest revenue producing sector of your company, or its most prestigious clients?
The Average Indian MBA Applicant: Has modest goals
Most Indian applicants aspire to either expand their family business or launch their own small business.
The DIFFERENTIATED Indian MBA Applicant: Has great ambitions
The top business schools are searching for applicants whose ambitions will have impact on a larger scale. Furthermore, you need to convey your excitement and enthusiasm for your career and your goals. Grant the reader some insight into the emotional reasons behind your decision to pursue your path.
Did your experience collaborating with a Western consultant to boost the results of your department inspire you to launch your own consultancy?
Did spending your afternoons toiling on your family's vegetable garden motivate you to develop an environmentally safe insecticide and lead a company on a mission to increase the world's food supply?
The Average Indian MBA Applicant: Has many extracurricular activities
Unlike many other population groups, Indian applicants are often involved in many activities outside of school and work.
The DIFFERENTIATED Indian MBA Applicant: Leads outside of work
Don't confuse hobbies for involvement and impact. The top business schools are looking for applicants who hold active leadership roles in a few organizations, not a jumble of low-key memberships. Be sure to continue your active extracurricular involvement and leadership even after college.
Has your love of the sciences prompted you to found an after-school program with free science tutoring and exciting interactive experiments that now includes 20 schools across India?
Do you lead the Red Cross volunteer recruiting efforts across India?
The Average Indian MBA Applicant: Thinks all top business schools are the same
Indian applicants tend to know they want a top MBA, but they don't do enough research on the programs to determine if and how each aligns with their goals. They tend to give a brief overview of the skills they hope to gain from the MBA and don't demonstrate that they know anything about each program.
The DIFFERENTIATED Indian MBA Applicant: Knows why he is applying to each school
There are two reasons why you need to understand each school's program: for your interest and theirs. Just as it is in your interest to know what requirements the school has, for instance a fourth post-high school year of study (e.g., the Master in Commerce) before you apply to ensure that your application is even considered, so too it is in your interest to determine if the schools you are considering will meet your needs. If you plan to concentrate in a particular industry, you need to make sure that the schools you are applying to have courses of study in that industry.
The top business schools seek applicants that can demonstrate that they understand the school's goals and how their program will help them meet the applicant's needs. They are looking for applicants who have visited the school, spoken to alumni, researched their specific interests, and know what makes this school distinct.
Do your medical background and future aspirations to fund medical technology ventures steer you to Fuqua?
Do you want to refine your manufacturing background in a specialized program like Kellogg's?
Putting it all together
Each school is sifting through those hundreds of applications to find the Indian applicants that will be able to benefit from its program and enhance the education and experience of its other students. But determining which stories differentiate your application is daunting.

More advice from Accepted.com:

I recently received a question-or more of a complaint-from a client who was concerned with his status as an Indian IT male. This individual was considering changing his location on his application-he was born, raised, and still lived in India, but his family had lived in Zurich for four years, starting when he was six, and he wanted to focus on that-or just somehow focusing on his job as a restaurant manager, rather than his extensive experience and education in IT.
I get questions like this all the time, so I thought it would be appropriate to post the answer that I gave this particular young man:
B-schools have been known to "group" applicants in ethnic, gender, and professional categories for administrative purposes, but that certainly does not mean that they are accepting and rejecting candidates based solely on those labels and groupings.
The purpose of the admissions process is to allow the adcoms an opportunity to get to know you as an individual-beyond labels. It's your job to show the adcoms that you are not simply another face in the crowd of Indian (or American, for that matter) IT males, but that you are a unique, category-less group of ONE. You are not Indian, not American, not American Indian, not Indian American, not IT, and not male; you are YOU.
Don't get hung up on the group or the label. Instead focus on ways you can draw out your individuality. It is true that you will need to work on this harder than, say, an entrepreneurial woman from a village in the Himalayas, but that's not to say it can't be done. By constructing killer essays that come alive with your personality, diverse interests and talents, and your not-to-be-overlooked strengths and passions, you'll prove a candidacy equal in competitiveness to our Himalayan candidate.
That was my response to our Indian IT male friend, but it can be applied to anyone who is getting bogged down in the labels and losing focus on the process of individuating. Think about what sets you apart from your group. Highlight your uniqueness in your essays, and the adcoms will get a clear look at how you-not your group-will contribute to your chosen MBA program or profession.
Last but not least, don't stress. Just because you are an Indian IT guy (or a member of some other common subgroup in the applicant pool), doesn't mean that you don't possess other unique qualities that will make you an attractive candidate at top b-schools.
Bryant Michaels
MBA Admissions Consultant


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by RutaB12 » Tue Jul 03, 2012 6:21 pm
This reply is just awesome !! Thanks Bryan for your very insightful comments !!