Hello, which of the following sentence makes more sense?
1. When my family first immigrated to the US, I was faced with the challenge of tackling a new foreign language as a young child.
OR
2. When my family first immigrated to the US, I was faced with the challenge of tackling a new foreign language.
Please let me know if Sentence #1 sounds wordy/redundant.
Thanks!
John
1. When my family first immigrated to the US, I was faced with the challenge of tackling a new foreign language as a young child.
OR
2. When my family first immigrated to the US, I was faced with the challenge of tackling a new foreign language.
Please let me know if Sentence #1 sounds wordy/redundant.
Thanks!
John
