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by AnuragRatna » Sun Aug 31, 2014 5:48 am
Merchandisers reported mild profits in their December business, as much because of their top line revenue of a year earlier being so weak as that customers were gaining a new beginning on purchasing their Christmas present.

(A) of their top line revenue of a year earlier being so weak as that
(B) of their top line revenue of a year earlier having been as weak as because
(C) of their a top line revenue of the year before being as weak as because
(D) their top line revenue a year before had been so weak as because
(E) of their top line revenue of the year before were as weak as that
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by Uva@90 » Sun Aug 31, 2014 10:56 pm
AnuragRatna wrote:Merchandisers reported mild profits in their December business, as much because of their top line revenue of a year earlier being so weak as that customers were gaining a new beginning on purchasing their Christmas present.

(A) of their top line revenue of a year earlier being so weak as that
(B) of their top line revenue of a year earlier having been as weak as because
(C) of their a top line revenue of the year before being as weak as because
(D) their top line revenue a year before had been so weak as because
(E) of their top line revenue of the year before were as weak as that
Hi Anurag,

Is OA D ?

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by [email protected] » Mon Sep 01, 2014 12:08 pm
Hi AnuragRatna,

This SC can actually be solved with one Verb rule, although there are also Parallelism rules in play.

1) Verbs: Here we have 2 past events - "the merchandisers REPORTED" about their December business AND a reference to their business a year before. With two past events, we need the verb "had." Eliminate A, B, C and E.

Final Answer: D

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by AnuragRatna » Tue Sep 02, 2014 10:57 am
Yes,OA is D
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