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by nycknicks11 » Wed May 25, 2011 12:08 am
After decreasing steadily in the mid-1990's, the percentage of students in the United States finishing high school or having earned equivalency diplomas increased in the last three years of the decade, up to 86.5 percent in 2000 from 85.9 percent in 1999 and 84.8 percent in 1998.

(A) finishing high school or having earned equivalency diplomas increased in the last three years of the decade, up to 86.5 percent in 2000 from 85.9 percent in 1999 and
(B) finishing high school or earning equivalency diplomas, increasing in the last three years of the decade, rising to 86.5 percent in 2000 from 85.9 percent in 1999 and from
(C) having finished high school or earning an equivalency diploma increased in the last three years of the decade, and rose to 86.5 percent in 2000 from 85.9 percent in 1999 and from
(D) who either finished high school or they earned an equivalency diploma, increasing in the last three years of the decade, rose to 86.5 percent in 2000 from 85.9 percent in 1999 and
(E) who finished high school or earned equivalency diplomas increased in the last three years of the decade, to 86.5 percent in 2000 from 85.9 percent in 1999 and


I can't find definitive expl. for this question. The popular "answer" you can eliminate A thru C because "finishing" and "having" is modifying USA. Is this true? IS it acceptable?

I think the error here is that its consecutive modifiers NOT because "finishing" is modifying USA?
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by HSPA » Wed May 25, 2011 12:19 am
E for me

We need who to indicate students..who finished their courses.

either X or Y.. X and Y shall be parallel.
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by sameerballani » Wed May 25, 2011 5:05 am
I feel the answer is E. What's the correct answer?
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by bubbliiiiiiii » Wed May 25, 2011 5:09 am
+1 for E.
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