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artstudent
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Hi,
Doesn't D break parallelism here? "to the refineries of North American" AND "to the world"
The presence of "to" in the second part makes it unparallelled? first part talks about refineries second part talks about countries.
If there's no "to" then it makes sense. Refineries of North America and the world. OR "to that of the world."
Doesn't D break parallelism here? "to the refineries of North American" AND "to the world"
The presence of "to" in the second part makes it unparallelled? first part talks about refineries second part talks about countries.
If there's no "to" then it makes sense. Refineries of North America and the world. OR "to that of the world."
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