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Only one correct? Or alternative?

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by pradeepkaushal9518 » Fri Dec 17, 2010 7:21 am
imo first one is correct second one is too wordy
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by Jim@Grockit » Sun Dec 19, 2010 10:40 pm
pradeepkaushal9518 wrote:imo first one is correct second one is too wordy
Especially since "but" carries with it all the contrast you would need; "rather" adds nothing.
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