Many analysts have recently predicted

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Many analysts have recently predicted

by rakeshd347 » Sat Oct 05, 2013 5:05 am
Many analysts have recently predicted that democratic institutions will develop in China, as the
growth of democracy has generally followed industrial development in other countries
throughout the 20th century.
"¢ has generally followed industrial development
"¢ generally followed industrial development
"¢ had generally followed industrial development
"¢ generally follows industrial development
"¢ followed general industrial development

OA is B
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by theCodeToGMAT » Sat Oct 05, 2013 5:17 am
{A} - INCORRECT; we want the "as the .... " in past inorder to be inline with "have" so, "has" is incorrect
{B} - CORRECT
{C} - INCORRECT; "had" is not needed
{D} - INCORRECT; "follows" is wrong tense
{E} - INCORRECT; "generally" should act as Adverb

What is the OA???
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by vinay1983 » Sat Oct 05, 2013 5:46 am
rakeshd347 wrote:Many analysts have recently predicted that democratic institutions will develop in China, as the
growth of democracy has generally followed industrial development in other countries
throughout the 20th century.
"¢ has generally followed industrial development
"¢ generally followed industrial development
"¢ had generally followed industrial development
"¢ generally follows industrial development
"¢ followed general industrial development

OA is B
Has to be B

A - "has" redundant or not required
B-Correct
C-"had" not required
D-No-no "follows" is wrong usage
E-subtle Meaning change"growth of democracy generally followed industrail development" as in to say that wherever industrail development has happened democracy has followed suit
You can, for example never foretell what any one man will do, but you can say with precision what an average number will be up to!

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