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isisalaska
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1st sentence:
You need the possessive pronoun “whose” referring to the depiction of scenes of life and death so A, B, and D are out. Between C and E I would chose C since “in the fact that” is redundant here.
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2nd sentence
This is a little tricky. I believe the past tense “have not met” is incorrect since this is an ongoing action, so C, D and E are out. Between A and B I go with B for the word placement in the sentence
You need the possessive pronoun “whose” referring to the depiction of scenes of life and death so A, B, and D are out. Between C and E I would chose C since “in the fact that” is redundant here.
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2nd sentence
This is a little tricky. I believe the past tense “have not met” is incorrect since this is an ongoing action, so C, D and E are out. Between A and B I go with B for the word placement in the sentence
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