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by AnjaliOberoi » Tue Dec 24, 2013 10:15 pm
The electronics company has unveiled what it claims to be the world's smallest network digital
camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs
less than 11 ounces.
A. to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld
computer, and it weighs
B. to be the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld
computer, weighing
C. is the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer,
and it weighs
D. is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, which is as long as a handheld computer and
weighs
E. is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld
computer, weighing


Confused between D and E
OA D
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by theCodeToGMAT » Wed Dec 25, 2013 11:00 pm
{A} - INCORRECT; "it" seems to modify "electronic company"
{B} - INCORRECT; "which" is modifying world; weighing is not needed in adverbial form
{C} - INCORRECT; "which" is modifying world; "it" seems to modify "electronic company"
{D} - CORRECT
{E} - INCORRECT; weighing is not needed in adverbial form - weighing should desribe camcorder
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