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by ranjithreddy.k9 » Tue Jun 28, 2011 8:11 am
Minnesota is the only one of the contiguous forty-eight states that still has a sizable wolf population, and where this predator remains the archenemy of cattle and sheep.

(A) that still has a sizable wolf population, and where
(B) that still has a sizable wolf population, where
(C) that still has a sizable population of wolves, and where
(D) where the population of wolves is still sizable;
(E) where there is still a sizable population of wolves and where
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by HSPA » Tue Jun 28, 2011 8:21 am
I ended up btw C and E...
First take: 640 (50M, 27V) - RC needs 300% improvement
Second take: coming soon..
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by Frankenstein » Tue Jun 28, 2011 8:29 am
Hi,
Parallelism where.... and where....
Hence, E
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by hey_thr67 » Tue Jun 28, 2011 8:36 am
Ans is E where .. where parallelism...
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by ranjithreddy.k9 » Tue Jun 28, 2011 3:04 pm
i agree that parallelism in C is inferior to the parallelism exhibited in E..but isn't it wrong that 'this predator' refers to 'wolves' which is plural? Please explain if i am wrong
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by sanabk » Tue Jun 28, 2011 4:30 pm
A
"this predator remains" -> wolf

and

", and where" -> Minnesota

???

Correct me if I am wrong.
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by ranjithreddy.k9 » Wed Jun 29, 2011 5:54 am
sanabk wrote:A
"this predator remains" -> wolf

and

", and where" -> Minnesota

???

Correct me if I am wrong.
OA is E
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by Frankenstein » Wed Jun 29, 2011 6:17 am
ranjithreddy.k9 wrote:i agree that parallelism in C is inferior to the parallelism exhibited in E..but isn't it wrong that 'this predator' refers to 'wolves' which is plural? Please explain if i am wrong
Hi,
'this' is not used a pronoun here. 'this' is used as an adjective. So, it is fine. If you still have doubt, you can refer to Ron's post:
https://www.beatthegmat.com/sc-t80992-15.html
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by Sanjay2706 » Fri Jul 01, 2011 1:25 am
I think C starts off with'that' and then has 'where' in it.
Therefore, E wins the battle here.
Good Question.
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