In order to make skiing smoother, safer and more enjoyable,

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In order to make skiing smoother, safer and more enjoyable, a number of resorts have hired consultants to design and sculpt the trails.


a) In order to make skiing smoother, safer and more enjoyable, a number of resorts have hired consultants

b) In order to make skiing smoother, safer, and more enjoyable a number of consultants have been hired by resorts

c) In the interest of making skiing smoother, safer, and able to be enjoyed, a number of resorts have hired consultants

d) To make skiing smoother, safer, so that you can enjoy it, a number of resorts have hired consultants

e) To make skiing smoother, also safer and enjoyable, a number of resorts will have hired consultants

OA A

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