What is wrong with this sentence

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What is wrong with this sentence

by venmic » Fri Aug 26, 2011 2:28 pm
I do know there is something wrong I need to understand logic

Hospitals have focused on supporting practitioners from all fields of medicine, are now striving to become efficient solutions

How should this sentence actually be written
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by ashhchdg » Mon Aug 29, 2011 4:45 am
It would be helpful if u provide the complete sentence. From the bit provided i am unable to understand what exactly is the sentence trying to compare.

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