OG (10th ed) - SC - #43 ) Multiple Modifiers -How to arrange

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by anantbhatia » Wed Aug 18, 2010 11:25 pm
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by FightWithGMAT » Thu Aug 19, 2010 3:25 am
GMATMadeEasy wrote:43. In the minds of many people living in England, before Australia was Australia, it was the antipodes, the opposite pole to civilization, an obscure and unimagin­able place that was considered the end of the world.

(A) before Australia was Australia, it was the antipodes

(B) before there was Australia, it was the antipodes

(C) it was the antipodes that was Australia

(D) Australia was what was the antipodes

(E) Australia was what had been known as the antipodes

Correct answer is A .

i infer from correct answer that the last two modifiers (the opposite pole to civilization, an obscure and unimagin­able place that was considered the end of the world. ) or appositive more precisely are correctly used. But I am not sure of reasoing that can be used to explain.

If I turn the question this way,
The opposite pole to civilization, an obscure and unimagin­able place that was considered the end of the world, the antipodes is knows as Austalia today.
, is the usage of modifier is correct ? How and Why ? I hope some experts can throw their advise on this.
POE will lead us to A. But I have a basic question, maybe I am missing something.....
Should not the option A be...

before Australia was Australia, it had been the antipodes

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by GMATMadeEasy » Thu Aug 19, 2010 7:24 am
May be we need to ask the expert as modifiers are delicate to handle :) .

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by lunarpower » Fri Sep 10, 2010 5:44 am
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GMATMadeEasy wrote:i infer from correct answer that the last two modifiers (the opposite pole to civilization, an obscure and unimagin­able place that was considered the end of the world. ) or appositive more precisely are correctly used. But I am not sure of reasoing that can be used to explain.
you are correct -- the last two modifiers are appositives.
i'm not really sure what you mean by "reasoning", as you appear to have already identified what's going on.

the only thing that i think you might be asking about is the order of the appositives -- is that what you're asking about?
if so, then that's pretty random -- those are just two appositives, for which the directions are basically the same (put them after the noun "antipodes"). since you obviously can't put both of them immediately after the noun -- you have to put one after the other -- they've chosen the phrasing in which the shorter of the two appositives is used first, in order to make the sentence more easily readable.

as an analogy, see the orange and blue examples in the following link. it's not an exact analogy, since they aren't appositives, but it's the same sort of deal (the order of 2 constructions is dependent on their relative length):
https://www.beatthegmat.com/introductory ... tml#234030
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by lunarpower » Fri Sep 10, 2010 5:44 am
If I turn the question this way,
The opposite pole to civilization, an obscure and unimagin­able place that was considered the end of the world, the antipodes is knows as Austalia today.
, is the usage of modifier is correct ? How and Why ? I hope some experts can throw their advise on this.
you could do that, yes, although the meaning of the sentence has now been distorted (i.e., the sentence doesn't have the correct meaning anymore).
i.e., the original sentence talks about australia (a given place that exists in objective reality), noting that it was once known as the antipodes. this new sentence, on the other hand, appears to be talking about "the antipodes" as though that's a place that exists in objective reality, and about "australia" as an incidental label; that's the wrong meaning.
the grammar, on the other hand, is fine.
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