BREAKING: Target Test Prep releases Brand New 2026 On Demand GMAT prep course

Redeem

Abraham Lincoln

Expert replies
Source: — Sentence Correction |

by reply2spg » Mon Aug 30, 2010 12:44 pm
This is similar to one of the OG questions and answer is B

'Themes' plural, need 'were' or 'have' remove A, C and D.

E is out because of the meaning change.

B is correct
Sudhanshu
(have lot of things to learn from all of you)
Join the discussion

by BastiG » Mon Aug 30, 2010 2:36 pm
reply2spg wrote:This is similar to one of the OG questions and answer is B

'Themes' plural, need 'were' or 'have' remove A, C and D.

E is out because of the meaning change.

B is correct
What is the OG question?
Join the discussion

by Brian@VeritasPrep » Mon Aug 30, 2010 8:29 pm
Exactly right regarding "themes" as plural..and it's part of a compound subject, too (along with "writing style"), so that would also make it plural (say, for example, it were "Lincoln's writing style and flair for public speaking..." it would have to be "were", too).

C, D, and E are also wrong because of the "had been" past-perfect tense. That tense comes up a lot on GMAT questions, and you should look forward to that - in order to use that tense, you need to have another past-tense event that happens after the "had" tense.

You could say:

"By the time Lincoln delivered the Gettysburg Address he had already penned dozens of speeches that are today considered classics."

Because "delivered" clearly happens after "had already penned".

You couldn't say:

"Abraham Lincoln, America's 16th president, had become famous as a public speaker when he debated Stephen Douglas."

Those events happened at the same time ("when" tells us that), so the "had" past-perfect tense doesn't work.

When you see the presence of the word "had" indicating the past perfect tense, check the timeline to ensure that it's warranted!
Brian Galvin
GMAT Instructor
Chief Academic Officer
Veritas Prep

Looking for GMAT practice questions? Try out the Veritas Prep Question Bank. Learn More.
Join the discussion

by paes » Tue Aug 31, 2010 1:50 am
Brian@VeritasPrep wrote:Exactly right regarding "themes" as plural..and it's part of a compound subject, too (along with "writing style"), so that would also make it plural (say, for example, it were "Lincoln's writing style and flair for public speaking..." it would have to be "were", too).

C, D, and E are also wrong because of the "had been" past-perfect tense. That tense comes up a lot on GMAT questions, and you should look forward to that - in order to use that tense, you need to have another past-tense event that happens after the "had" tense.

You could say:

"By the time Lincoln delivered the Gettysburg Address he had already penned dozens of speeches that are today considered classics."

Because "delivered" clearly happens after "had already penned".

You couldn't say:

"Abraham Lincoln, America's 16th president, had become famous as a public speaker when he debated Stephen Douglas."

Those events happened at the same time ("when" tells us that), so the "had" past-perfect tense doesn't work.

When you see the presence of the word "had" indicating the past perfect tense, check the timeline to ensure that it's warranted!

Only D is using had been. C is using has been and E is using have been.
Join the discussion

• Page 1 of 1