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huge fying reptile

by heymayank08 » Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:35 am
8. A huge flying reptile that died out with the dinosaurs some 65 million years ago, the Quetzalcoatlus had a wingspan of 36 feet, believed to be the largest flying creature the world has ever seen.
(A) believed to be
(B) and that is believed to be
(C) and it is believed to have been
(D) which was, it is believed,
(E) which is believed to be

plz help
OA is c
but why B is wrong
isnt c wordy due to Have been .[/b]
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by Gaurav 2013-fall » Wed Feb 22, 2012 9:53 pm
this sentence has three parts as underlined below:

A huge flying reptile that died out with the dinosaurs some 65 million years ago, the Quetzalcoatlus had a wingspan of 36 feet, believed to be the largest flying creature the world has ever seen.

The third part is continuous with the first part. But if you use option (B), it conveys that third part is talking more about the wingspan.

Hope this helps.

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by GmatKiss » Thu Feb 23, 2012 6:16 am
A huge flying reptile that died out with the dinosaurs some 65 million years ago, the Quetzalcoatlus had a wingspan of 36 feet, believed to be the largest flying creature the world has ever seen.

(A) believed to be - 36 feet believed to be???? - Awkward
(B) and that is believed to be - Present and Present
(C) and it is believed to have been - Present and Past
(D) which was, it is believed,
(E) which is believed to be

IMO: C

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