i received a private message regarding this problem.
first, note that this problem is not from GMAT PREP -- a quick internet search reveals that it is from the old ETS paper exams, and that it has also apparently been lifted by "1000sc".
the fatal flaw in choice (b) is its needlessly splitting the modifier "in greater detail than ever before". i can't see any reason to split this modifier in the first place -- i.e., i can't think of any constructions that could be legitimately inserted into it -- but the comma placed after "in greater detail" is especially heinous. that comma totally changes the meaning, because the sentence is now basically just saying "in greater detail", rather than saying "in greater detail than ever before" as it's supposed to.
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