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by cooldude » Thu Sep 28, 2006 7:56 pm
oa is d;but y not b?in d persistent qualifies terrorists isnt it?so y d?

277. Europe’s travel industry is suffering as a result of a sluggish economy, a stretch of bad weather, as well as the chilling effects of terrorist activity that is persistent.
(A) as well as the chilling effects of terrorist activity that is persistent
(B) and the chilling effect of terrorist activity that is persistent
(C) but persistent terrorist activity has had a chilling effect too
(D) and the chilling effects of persistent terrorist activity
(E) as well as the chilling effects of terrorist activity that persists
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by prachipareekh » Thu Sep 28, 2006 8:57 pm
B - incorrect - ambiguous and wordy - that is persistent refers to chilling effect or to terrorist activity --- not clear
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The answer is D

by abby_g » Sat Sep 30, 2006 8:52 am
Europe’s travel industry is suffering as a result of:
1. a sluggish economy,
2. a stretch of bad weather,
3. and the chilling effects of persistent terrorist activity.

Moreover, "and the chilling effects of persistent terrorist activity" is precise and succinct than "the chilling effects of terrorist activity that is persistent". The latter is wordy. Hence D.
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by bhumika.k.shah » Mon Feb 08, 2010 4:18 am
I agree. Option D is precise.

I'd go with D

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abby_g wrote:Europe�s travel industry is suffering as a result of:
1. a sluggish economy,
2. a stretch of bad weather,
3. and the chilling effects of persistent terrorist activity.

Moreover, "and the chilling effects of persistent terrorist activity" is precise and succinct than "the chilling effects of terrorist activity that is persistent". The latter is wordy. Hence D.
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by [email protected] » Sun Jan 08, 2012 11:34 pm
yes the correct answer is D man... just got a bit confused between the options B and D.
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