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by gmatblood » Thu Oct 20, 2011 10:28 am
More and more holidaymakers are choosing to fly to remote islands in search of the perfect beach; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

A. ; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.
B. ; seeking sad, sun, palm trees and not entertainment.
C. , with sand, sun, palm trees and no entertainment.
D. , they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than entertainment centers.
E. ; they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

IMO: E
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by GmatKiss » Thu Oct 20, 2011 10:40 am
Interesting one! what is the source and arent you tired of posting questions!

I wonder if this is an automation :lol:
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by gmatblood » Thu Oct 20, 2011 10:46 am
Ok let me have a pause for now :D
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by saketk » Thu Oct 20, 2011 10:55 am
gmatblood wrote:More and more holidaymakers are choosing to fly to remote islands in search of the perfect beach; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

A. ; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.
B. ; seeking sad, sun, palm trees and not entertainment.
C. , with sand, sun, palm trees and no entertainment.
D. , they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than entertainment centers.
E. ; they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

IMO: E
semi colon -- we need a independent clauses on both sides..

In the original sentence there is no subject in the second part. who is seeking sun, sand etc?

we need "they" here. to make it an independent clause.

[spoiler]choose E (D has a comma here )[/spoiler]
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by sam2304 » Fri Oct 21, 2011 1:41 am
IMO E. We need independent clauses on both sides as said by saket.
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by vaibhavgupta » Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:13 pm
gmatblood wrote:More and more holidaymakers are choosing to fly to remote islands in search of the perfect beach; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

A. ; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.
B. ; seeking sad, sun, palm trees and not entertainment.
C. , with sand, sun, palm trees and no entertainment.
D. , they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than entertainment centers.
E. ; they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

IMO: E
+1 for E !
If OA is A, IMO B
If OA is B, IMO C
If OA is C, IMO D
If OA is D, IMO E
If OA is E, IMO A

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