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Is "Double Comma" under the Modifier rule?

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by torofish » Thu Aug 19, 2010 9:32 am
It's from Grockit

Studying the fruit fly, a household nuisance but a time-honored experimental subject, has enabled the secrets of how embryos develop to begin to be unraveled by scientists.
A) Studying the fruit fly, a household nuisance but a time-honored experimental subject, has enabled the secrets of how embryos develop to begin to be unraveled by scientists.
B) By the study of the fruit fly, a household nuisance and also a time-honored experimental subject, it was possible for the secrets of how embryos develop to begin to be unraveled by scientists.
C) By studying a household nuisance but a time-honored experimental subject, the fruit fly enabled scientists to begin to unravel the secrets of how embryos develop.
D) By studying the fruit fly, a household nuisance and also a time-honored experimental subject, the secrets of how embryos develop are beginning to be unraveled by scientist.
E) The study of the fruit fly, a household nuisance but a time-honored experimental subject, has enabled scientist to begin to unravel the secrets of how embryos develop.

we can see that "a household nuisance.....subject" is inside double comma. The info in there can be neglected.
But is it under the modifier rule in which "a house hold nuisance" is "studying" something?
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by madhukumar_v » Thu Aug 19, 2010 10:52 am
"a household nuisance but a time-honored experimental subject " is an appositive (or simply defining something), modifying fruit fly.

A,B,C are wrong because of dangling modifier (A important noun missing which is being defined). All these three choices lack a subject of who did the studying or study

D suggests the studying is done by "the secrets" not scientist, also uses passive voice (by and usage of to be unravelled)

E is good -> study has enabled scientist to do something...
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by gmat_perfect » Thu Aug 19, 2010 1:25 pm
torofish wrote:It's from Grockit

Studying the fruit fly, a household nuisance but a time-honored experimental subject, has enabled the secrets of how embryos develop to begin to be unraveled by scientists.
A) Studying the fruit fly, a household nuisance but a time-honored experimental subject, has enabled the secrets of how embryos develop to begin to be unraveled by scientists.
B) By the study of the fruit fly, a household nuisance and also a time-honored experimental subject, it was possible for the secrets of how embryos develop to begin to be unraveled by scientists.
C) By studying a household nuisance but a time-honored experimental subject, the fruit fly enabled scientists to begin to unravel the secrets of how embryos develop.
D) By studying the fruit fly, a household nuisance and also a time-honored experimental subject, the secrets of how embryos develop are beginning to be unraveled by scientist.
E) The study of the fruit fly, a household nuisance but a time-honored experimental subject, has enabled scientist to begin to unravel the secrets of how embryos develop.

we can see that "a household nuisance.....subject" is inside double comma. The info in there can be neglected.
But is it under the modifier rule in which "a house hold nuisance" is "studying" something?
Let me explain.

The study of the members of facebook, a social net work, has enabled many social scientist to know many things.

--> here, study is not social net work. It is the facebook that is social net work.

Come to E.

The study of the fruit fly, a household ....subject, has enabled..

Study is not experimental subject. It is the fruit fly that is the experimental subject.

I think it is clear now.

Thanks.
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by SeemaSkl » Thu Aug 19, 2010 1:57 pm
Did anybody notice use of the word 'scientist' in D and E. Is it a typo?
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by reply2spg » Thu Aug 26, 2010 10:35 am
Finished in 55 seconds.

I hope that this is correct question then only E makes sense here.
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by scorpionz » Thu Aug 26, 2010 10:46 am
SeemaSkl wrote:Did anybody notice use of the word 'scientist' in D and E. Is it a typo?
Yes, I too observed it and hence none of the options made sense...

@Torofish..

Can you plz confirm that 'scientist' in options D & E is incorrect? At least in option E, which seems to be the correct choice, it has to be 'scientists'..
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by reply2spg » Thu Aug 26, 2010 8:25 pm
Why you guys think scientist is wrong in E?
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by Kajiabeat » Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:34 am
Is there anything wrong in choice A?
I mean, I also chose E,but I can't figure out why A is not OK.

if the "a household......" could be taken as the subject of "studying" then there won't be a comma after this noun phrase, right?
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by uwhusky » Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:03 am
"...to begin to be unraveled by scientists." in A is problematic, it's an infinitive passive voice construction that is wordy and confusing. I think that's probably something OG would write.
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by Jim@Grockit » Sat Sep 04, 2010 1:32 pm
"Scientist" in choice E is a typo, I believe.

It can't be choice A because of "has enabled the secrets to begin to be unraveled by scientists." Enabling secrets to do anything is at least suboptimal usage, but aside from that (as uwhusky pointed out) it's passive and really wordy.
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by ankurmit » Sat Sep 04, 2010 10:47 pm
IMO E
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by Kajiabeat » Tue Sep 07, 2010 1:06 am
Jim@Grockit wrote:"Scientist" in choice E is a typo, I believe.

It can't be choice A because of "has enabled the secrets to begin to be unraveled by scientists." Enabling secrets to do anything is at least suboptimal usage, but aside from that (as uwhusky pointed out) it's passive and really wordy.
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by lunarpower » Tue Sep 14, 2010 5:23 am
Jim@Grockit wrote:"Scientist" in choice E is a typo, I believe.

It can't be choice A because of "has enabled the secrets to begin to be unraveled by scientists." Enabling secrets to do anything is at least suboptimal usage, but aside from that (as uwhusky pointed out) it's passive and really wordy.
this is the basic deal, but it's not just "suboptimal" -- it's wrong.

"enable" needs to have, as its object, a person/agent who now has the ability to do something.

for instance:

this key enables me to open the lock --> correct, since *i* now have the ability to open the lock -- an ability that i did not have before i acquired the key.

this key enables the lock to be opened (by me) --> incorrect, since the lock is just as "able to be opened" as it was before (the issue is just that *i* couldn't open it)

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jim, be careful with "it's passive"; you're talking as though the passive is an error.
it's not. the passive is just as legitimate as the active.

in fact, of the passive-vs.-active splits in OG12, the majority (17 out of 33) are decided in favor of the passive.
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