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GMAT Prep Question

by chaitanya.mehrotra » Mon Jul 04, 2011 9:59 am
More than 300 rivers drain into Siberia's Lake Baikal, which holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water, more than all the North American Great Lakes combined.

(A) More than 300 rivers drain into Siberia's Lake Baikal, which holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water, more than all the North American Great Lakes combined.
(B) With 20 percent of the world's fresh water, that is more than all the North American Great Lakes combined, Siberia's Lake Baikal has more than 300 rivers that drain into it.
(C) Siberia's Lake Baikal, with more than 300 rivers draining into it, it holds more of the world's fresh water than all that of the North American Great Lakes combined, 20 percent.
(D) While more than 300 rivers drain into it, Siberia's Lake Baikal holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water, which is more than all the North American Great Lakes combined.
(E) More than all the North American Great Lakes combined, Siberia's Lake Baikal, with more than 300 rivers draining into it, holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water.

Why option E is wrong? "more than all the North American Great Lakes combined" seem to be compared with Siberia's Lake Baikal
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by Frankenstein » Mon Jul 04, 2011 10:15 am
Hi,
In E, the opening phrase should modify the noun following it. So, 'More than all the North American Great Lakes combined' modifies Siberia's Lake Baikal, which is incorrect.
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