Mini Scholarship for September 15 - October 15, 2006

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by cooldude » Thu Oct 19, 2006 10:21 pm
hey eric where is criticism for my essay man? :?: how m i gonna learn without knowing my mistakes? :idea: :roll:

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by ajith » Fri Oct 20, 2006 4:32 am
Congratz Nandan... Keep it up!

Eric,

It woulda been better if you comment about every essay, I know that would be difficult too. Anyway this is a great one.

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by beatthegmat » Fri Oct 20, 2006 8:10 am
Hi cooldude:

Unfortunately, I don't have the bandwidth to critique every essay submission.

Anyone else like to provide comments for the other essays?

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by aim-wsc » Fri Oct 20, 2006 11:04 pm
First of all congrats wildrebel.... what you said btw? cant let aim win one more scholarsip! huh! :)
beatthegmat wrote:
Overall, again, great work! You should be proud of your writing--I hope you can translate your excellent prose to your GMAT essays!
Eric,
He 's already done with his GMAT ( 710) & I think he might have submitted quite a few applications to the schools bynow.

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try to be neutral

by aim-wsc » Fri Oct 27, 2006 4:04 am
@ajith, cooldude, wildrebel,

while writing on such sensetive issue, try to be as neutral as you can.
also in real life we meet people from diverse community. we should learn to respect their opinions and learn to understand their perspective of looking at (err) life.
:)

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Re: try to be neutral

by ajith » Fri Oct 27, 2006 8:50 pm
aim-wsc wrote:@ajith, cooldude, wildrebel,

while writing on such sensetive issue, try to be as neutral as you can.
also in real life we meet people from diverse community. we should learn to respect their opinions and learn to understand their perspective of looking at (err) life.
:)
Thank you for providing the suggestion, but I dont know how neutral one can be when he is opinionated strongly in one way ..

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will start a new thread

by aim-wsc » Fri Nov 03, 2006 9:45 am
great work there ajith . GOOD MOD :) .
ajith wrote:
Thank you for providing the suggestion, but I dont know how neutral one can be when he is opinionated strongly in one way ..
dont worry, will start a new thread for opinions & opinionated ppl. ;)

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by ajith » Sun Nov 05, 2006 9:08 pm
That would do ....
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