This one is from an old paper test.
By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
A. their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent,
a market ranging
B. from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the
country, which ranges
C. to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the
country, a market ranging
D. in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the
country, which ranges
E. to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market,
which ranges
OA is B. My answer was E. Thought the modifier which ranges ... incorrectly modifies country.
By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
A. their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent,
a market ranging
B. from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the
country, which ranges
C. to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the
country, a market ranging
D. in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the
country, which ranges
E. to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market,
which ranges
OA is B. My answer was E. Thought the modifier which ranges ... incorrectly modifies country.
