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How to Write Winning MBA Application Essays
Essay questions for the 2022-2023 MBA application cycle are starting to be released. While we are still waiting on official confirmation from many top MBA programs (aside from HBS, which released its essay question last week), there are many essay questions that candidates can and should get started on today.
Before you put pencil to paper (so to speak) on your essays, Personal MBA Coach would like to get back to the basics with MBA Essay Writing 101.
Personal MBA Coach's Essay Writing Process:
We advise our candidates to follow a 5-step process as they develop their application essays, leaving adequate time for each stage.
1. Brainstorm
Brainstorm each question one at a time. For those applying early decision, start with ED essays first. Otherwise, begin with the easiest essay, as your writing will improve throughout the process. As you develop potential topics, consider relevant strengths, hobbies, passions, and experiences.
2. Outline
Before you begin to develop prose, outline the key points you hope to cover. Pay special attention to flow and length. (Hint: a 250-word outline is too long for a 500-word essay.)
3. Draft
Once you have a solid outline, begin to put together your first draft. At this stage, it is okay if your writing is not perfect. Most first drafts will and should be a bit longer than the final product. For your early versions, be sure that your points flow well and are easy to follow. Do not worry about grammar, spelling, or other minor errors.
4. Edit Again & Again
This is the longest part of the essay writing process. Edit your essays as many times as it takes to get them right. Finalize general content and flow, then begin to focus on fine-tuning your writing. If your essay is not working, do not be afraid to start over. You may need to repeat steps 1-3 multiple times.
5. Proofread
Always ask someone unfamiliar with your work (and ideally your industry) to read over your essays. You will need a fresh set of eyes to catch all mistakes. As an admission essay consultant, Personal MBA Coach uses seasoned proofreaders for each MBA application for this reason.
Now that you have the overall writing process down, let’s look at some key tips to keep in mind as you develop your essays.
Essay Guiding Principles:
1) Answer the question ASKED
It is surprising how often candidates write beautiful essays but do not answer the question. Instead of writing what you think admissions committee members want to hear, answer the question. While we advise thinking a bit outside of the box and considering the why behind an essay prompt, first and foremost you must answer the question.
Personal MBA Coach provides our clients with MBA essay samples to ensure that they have a clear understanding of what their essays should look like.
2) Write authentically
Do not write what you think admissions committee members want to read. There is no one perfect candidate profile. Instead, your uniqueness will be one of your greatest selling points. Your essays should paint a clear picture of who you are, what motivates you, and what you are passionate about.
Do not feel compelled to show how you fit the mold that seemingly makes up the “ideal” candidate. If you have no desire to run a non-profit, that is okay. If you are not motivated by improving the environment, do not pretend you are. Readers will see right through this, and you could end up doing more harm than good. Need help articulating your personal story? Learn more about story development here.
3) Be succinct and avoid repetition
Keep in mind that the essays are just one part of the application. In addition to submitting an MBA resume (unsure how to write an MBA resume? Check out these tips), most schools will have you fill out a detailed application. This means admissions committee members will read about everything you have accomplished, all the roles you have held, and the awards you have won. There is no need to try to fit this all into your essays.
So instead of squeezing in as much as you can, focus on sharing a few key highlights and adding the details as well as your voice. This is your chance to explain your choices, show your accomplishments, and share your passions. The fewer things you try to cover in your essays, the more you will be able to achieve this objective.
4) Keep your language approachable
The terms you regularly discuss at the office may be foreign to others, including admissions committee members. When in doubt, do not assume the reader is familiar with everything about your job. Focus on language that is more general and easier to use to compare you to other applicants.
Admissions committee members do not need or want all of the technical details anyway. Our exclusive MBA essay samples serve as an important reference here as well.
5) Limit flowery prose
Similarly, Personal MBA Coach often reads complex flowery prose. You are not submitting your essays for a Pulitzer Prize or applying to become a professional writer. Instead, you are telling your story. While of course you want your essays to be well written and free from grammatical mistakes and typos, you also want them to be relatable and easy to follow.
Everyone from your grandmother to a professor of microfinance should be able to understand your essays. They should also convey why you are someone others would want to study with, learn from, and eventually be inspired by. That type of person is human and down to earth. Your essays should show this.
Looking for an admission essay consultant? Essay writing is a key component of Personal MBA Coach’s services. Check out our comprehensive packages to learn how we can help you develop winning MBA essays.
About Personal MBA Coach:
Founded by a Wharton MBA and MIT Sloan graduate who sits on the Association of International Graduate Admissions Consultants Board of Directors, Personal MBA Coach has been guiding clients for 15 years and is consistently ranked #1 or #2 by leading sources including Poets & Quants.
We help clients with all aspects of the MBA application process including early planning, GMAT/GRE/EA tutoring, application strategy, school selection, essay editing, and mock interviews. Our team includes former M7 admissions directors and former M7 admissions interviewers.
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