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Profile Evaluation

by novian18 » Thu Jun 25, 2009 10:49 am
Hi! Maybe you can help me out, I'm trying to determine how strong my candidacy is, but I'm receiving varied feedback:

Me: 25 years old (26 at matriculation), caucasian, male
Academics: 3.55 Overall GPA from a top-40 undergraduate public business program; Major: Finance (3.94 GPA within major)
GMAT: 720 - Q49 V38 AWA 6.0
Work Experience: Upon matriculation, I will have 4 years of full time work experience in commercial banking/real estate for a publicly traded super regional bank. I have had the opportunity to function in both an analytical role and a sales role, which has helped me to develop my quantitative analytical abilities, but also work on my soft skills via tons of client interaction essentially since day one (I'm planning for this to be a big selling point). I've originated over $50 million in commercial loans, a portfolio I have subsequently managed, while selling commercial banking products to my clients. Additionally, I have been a project leader on an ongoing basis for our portfolio management team ($7 billion portfolio), delivering analysis and presentations to federal and state regulators as well as ratings agencies, etc...I have also been involved in the preparation of commentary for quarterly earnings conference calls; In 3 years, I've been promoted twice, and seen a 70% increase in pay (for those schools that monitor this sort of thing)
Recommendations: I won't be able to get direct supervisors bc of the sensitive nature of leaving the company, but will be able to get stellar recommendations from those who know me and my work very well (and, obviously, are my superiors)
Extra-curriculars: A few decent ones in college, though I did take a semester off school to work for a Fortune 20 company in order to beef up my resume, thus forcing me to relinquish some of my duties. Post-undergrad, I have been heavily involved with my alma mater's alumni association, and have participated as a mentor at a camp for underprivileged youths since 2007. This is probably my weakest credential
Personal: I'm still involved in recreational sports (flag football, softball, basketball), perform semi-frequently with a band, and also give formal guitar lessons (for a little extra dough)

I have done a lot of research on schools, their programs, and career placement and have made a list of 10 schools to which I will apply:

Wharton
Booth
Columbia
Fuqua
Ross
Georgetown
Tuck
NYU
HBS
Yale

The feedback I've received has been somewhat mixed...some people telling me my list is totally unreasonable...others saying it's a solid list and I should be able to get 2-3 acceptances...maybe you can weigh in. Thanks!
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by Stacey Oyler » Fri Jun 26, 2009 1:08 pm
Hi novian18 and thanks for your post. Please see my comments below:

Me: 25 years old (26 at matriculation), caucasian, male
Academics: 3.55 Overall GPA from a top-40 undergraduate public business program; Major: Finance (3.94 GPA within major)
GMAT: 720 - Q49 V38 AWA 6.0

Your academics seems quite solid and will certainly be a strength in your applications.

Work Experience: Upon matriculation, I will have 4 years of full time work experience in commercial banking/real estate for a publicly traded super regional bank. I have had the opportunity to function in both an analytical role and a sales role, which has helped me to develop my quantitative analytical abilities, but also work on my soft skills via tons of client interaction essentially since day one (I'm planning for this to be a big selling point). I've originated over $50 million in commercial loans, a portfolio I have subsequently managed, while selling commercial banking products to my clients. Additionally, I have been a project leader on an ongoing basis for our portfolio management team ($7 billion portfolio), delivering analysis and presentations to federal and state regulators as well as ratings agencies, etc...I have also been involved in the preparation of commentary for quarterly earnings conference calls; In 3 years, I've been promoted twice, and seen a 70% increase in pay (for those schools that monitor this sort of thing)

It sounds as though you've had a lot of exposure to different aspects of the business in the last 3 years. It's important that you are able to demonstrate not only growth, but impact and leadership which it sounds like you will be able to do with examples such as the portfolio you manage. Overall, this area seems quite solid.

Recommendations: I won't be able to get direct supervisors bc of the sensitive nature of leaving the company, but will be able to get stellar recommendations from those who know me and my work very well (and, obviously, are my superiors)

Adcoms understand that it isn't always possible to get recommendations from your direct supervisors. Just be sure that you choose recommenders who can speak to the work you've done. It's important that they be able to give solid examples of your experience to date.

Extra-curriculars: A few decent ones in college, though I did take a semester off school to work for a Fortune 20 company in order to beef up my resume, thus forcing me to relinquish some of my duties. Post-undergrad, I have been heavily involved with my alma mater's alumni association, and have participated as a mentor at a camp for underprivileged youths since 2007. This is probably my weakest credential
Personal: I'm still involved in recreational sports (flag football, softball, basketball), perform semi-frequently with a band, and also give formal guitar lessons (for a little extra dough)


It sounds as though you've got some decent extracurriculars tha you can reference in your application and essays. Bschools look to extracurricular activities not just to see what type of interests you have, but how involved you are in different organization as well as your own hobbies. Many applicants are able to write essays about the leadership roles they've had in their extracurricular activities. Perhaps you will be able to cite your involvement in the almuni association as a potential essay topic.

I have done a lot of research on schools, their programs, and career placement and have made a list of 10 schools to which I will apply:

Wharton
Booth
Columbia
Fuqua
Ross
Georgetown
Tuck
NYU
HBS
Yale

The feedback I've received has been somewhat mixed...some people telling me my list is totally unreasonable...others saying it's a solid list and I should be able to get 2-3 acceptances...maybe you can weigh in.

You have the potential to be competitive at many of the programs in your list, however, I would need to know more about your profile in order to give a fair assessment such as knowing where you went to undergrad, your career goals, etc.. I recommend that you send your resume to [email protected] to set up a free assessment to get a more detailed review of your profile.

Best,

Stacey
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