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GMATMadeEasy
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I have got two questions from manhattan CAT and extra questions :
1. Instead of buying stocks and bonds, which are the conventional approach for someone new to financial planning, real estate has become increasingly the choice of young people as a first investment.
A> buying stocks and bonds, which are the conventional approach for someone new to financial planning, real estate has become increasingly the choice of young people
B> buying stocks and bonds, which are the conventional approach for those new to financial planning, increasingly young people have shown a choice for real estate
C> buying stocks and bonds, which are the conventional approach for someone new to financial planning, the choice of young people increasingly has become real estate
D> buying stocks and bonds, which are the conventional investments for those new to financial planning, young people have increasingly chosen real estate
E> stocks and bonds, which are the conventional approach for those new to financial planning, young people have shown an increasing choice of real estate
Explanation in Manhattan says that :
The original sentence contains the idiom "Instead of A, [subject] B", where A contains a verb ending in "-ing". The correct form of this idiom can be seen in the following simple sentence:
Instead of doing his homework, Arthur watched TV
I will post an another question which says that for verb, we should use Rather than Not Instead of. May be i am missing something in explanation.
1. Instead of buying stocks and bonds, which are the conventional approach for someone new to financial planning, real estate has become increasingly the choice of young people as a first investment.
A> buying stocks and bonds, which are the conventional approach for someone new to financial planning, real estate has become increasingly the choice of young people
B> buying stocks and bonds, which are the conventional approach for those new to financial planning, increasingly young people have shown a choice for real estate
C> buying stocks and bonds, which are the conventional approach for someone new to financial planning, the choice of young people increasingly has become real estate
D> buying stocks and bonds, which are the conventional investments for those new to financial planning, young people have increasingly chosen real estate
E> stocks and bonds, which are the conventional approach for those new to financial planning, young people have shown an increasing choice of real estate
Explanation in Manhattan says that :
The original sentence contains the idiom "Instead of A, [subject] B", where A contains a verb ending in "-ing". The correct form of this idiom can be seen in the following simple sentence:
Instead of doing his homework, Arthur watched TV
I will post an another question which says that for verb, we should use Rather than Not Instead of. May be i am missing something in explanation.

















