BREAKING: Target Test Prep releases Brand New 2026 On Demand GMAT prep course

Redeem

600+ Lions

This topic has expert replies
Post new topic Locked
Previous Topic Next Topic
User avatar
Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts
Posts: 113
Joined: Sun Aug 22, 2010 12:37 am
Thanked: 16 times
Followed by:4 members

600+ Lions

by challenger63 » Sun Jan 20, 2013 6:56 am
Even today, lions can be seen ruling the African plains, hunting almost any animal that crosses its path and intimidating all but the most intrepid hunters.

(A) lions can be seen ruling the African plains
(B) lions are able to be seem ruling the African plains
(C) lions rule the African plains
(D) the lion rules the African plains
(E) the lion species rules the African plains

OA: D

Source: VeritasPrep, Video Lesson.
Last edited by challenger63 on Mon Jan 21, 2013 9:26 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Top
Source: — Sentence Correction |
Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts
Posts: 142
Joined: Sat Oct 20, 2012 3:31 am
Location: New Delhi
Thanked: 20 times
Followed by:3 members

by aman88 » Mon Jan 21, 2013 6:52 am
IMO D
Top

GMAT/MBA Expert

User avatar
GMAT Instructor
Posts: 451
Joined: Thu Jan 21, 2010 11:58 am
Location: New York City
Thanked: 188 times
Followed by:120 members
GMAT Score:770

by Tommy Wallach » Mon Jan 21, 2013 7:13 pm
challenger63 wrote:Even today, lions can be seen ruling the African plains, hunting almost any animal that crosses its path and intimidating all but the most intrepid hunters.

(A) lions can be seen ruling the African plains
(B) lions are able to be seem ruling the African plains
(C) lions rule the African plains
(D) the lion rules the African plains
(E) the lion species rules the African plains

OA will be later.[/spoiler]
This question is about parallelism, signaled by the "and" at the end of the sentence. There's no Oxford comma before the "and," so we know there are only two items in this list. That means we aren't going to match up ruling/hunting/intimidating. So the sentence needs a main verb that we'll modify with hunting/intimidating.

The pronoun issue, "its," means our antecedent needs to be the singular "the lion." There's no reason to have the word "species" in there, so the answer is (E).

-t
Tommy Wallach, Company Expert
ManhattanGMAT

If you found this posting mega-helpful, feel free to thank and/or follow me!
Top
Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts
Posts: 142
Joined: Sat Oct 20, 2012 3:31 am
Location: New Delhi
Thanked: 20 times
Followed by:3 members

by aman88 » Mon Jan 21, 2013 8:40 pm
Tommy Wallach wrote:
challenger63 wrote:
The pronoun issue, "its," means our antecedent needs to be the singular "the lion." There's no reason to have the word "species" in there, so the answer is (E).

-t
Hi Tommy,

I think you meant the answer is D. :)

Thanks.
Top

GMAT/MBA Expert

User avatar
GMAT Instructor
Posts: 451
Joined: Thu Jan 21, 2010 11:58 am
Location: New York City
Thanked: 188 times
Followed by:120 members
GMAT Score:770

by Tommy Wallach » Mon Jan 21, 2013 8:46 pm
Thanks Aman! You're right!

-t
Tommy Wallach, Company Expert
ManhattanGMAT

If you found this posting mega-helpful, feel free to thank and/or follow me!
Top
User avatar
Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts
Posts: 113
Joined: Sun Aug 22, 2010 12:37 am
Thanked: 16 times
Followed by:4 members

by challenger63 » Mon Jan 21, 2013 8:59 pm
The OA is provided in the initial post.
If you find my post useful, please don't hesitate to click thanks button.


I am not an expert, so I can make mistakes. If you see a mistake, please notify me.
Top

GMAT/MBA Expert

User avatar
GMAT Instructor
Posts: 451
Joined: Thu Jan 21, 2010 11:58 am
Location: New York City
Thanked: 188 times
Followed by:120 members
GMAT Score:770

by Tommy Wallach » Mon Jan 21, 2013 9:12 pm
Hey Challenger,

The answer is definitely not C! The pronoun disagreement between "lions" and "its" is no good!

-t
Tommy Wallach, Company Expert
ManhattanGMAT

If you found this posting mega-helpful, feel free to thank and/or follow me!
Top
User avatar
Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts
Posts: 113
Joined: Sun Aug 22, 2010 12:37 am
Thanked: 16 times
Followed by:4 members

by challenger63 » Mon Jan 21, 2013 9:30 pm
Tommy Wallach wrote:Hey Challenger,

The answer is definitely not C! The pronoun disagreement between "lions" and "its" is no good!

-t
Sorry, that was a typo.

For sure, C is wrong, because of the pronoun error.

Corrected OA. Next time I will try to avoid typos.
Thanks.
If you find my post useful, please don't hesitate to click thanks button.


I am not an expert, so I can make mistakes. If you see a mistake, please notify me.
Top
Post new topic Locked
• Page 1 of 1