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by nickhar130 » Thu Dec 02, 2010 3:04 pm
Scientists have recently discovered what could be the largest and oldest living organism on Earth, a giant
fungus that is an interwoven filigree of mushrooms and rootlike tentacles spawned by a single fertilized
spore some 10,000 years ago and extending for more than 30 acres in the soil of a Michigan forest.

(A) extending
(B) extends
(C) extended
(D) it extended
(E) is extending

Please help me understand the parellelism of spawned, extending.
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by pellucide » Thu Dec 02, 2010 3:24 pm
nickhar130 wrote:Scientists have recently discovered what could be the largest and oldest living organism on Earth, a giant
fungus that is an interwoven filigree of mushrooms and rootlike tentacles spawned by a single fertilized
spore some 10,000 years ago and extending for more than 30 acres in the soil of a Michigan forest.

(A) extending
(B) extends
(C) extended
(D) it extended
(E) is extending

Please help me understand the parellelism of spawned, extending.

We can restructure this huge statement into parts...
Scientists have recently discovered what could be the largest and oldest living organism on Earth,a giant fungus
that
is an interwoven filigree of mushrooms and rootlike tentacles spawned by a single fertilized spore some 10,000 years ago
and
(that) extending for more than 30 acres in the soil of a Michigan forest.

extending is incorrect if we structure it this way, because it is not parallel with that is. extends sounds better.

So it should read as...
Scientists have recently discovered what could be the largest and oldest living organism on Earth,a giant fungus
that
is an interwoven filigree of mushrooms and rootlike tentacles spawned by a single fertilized spore some 10,000 years ago
and
(that) extends for more than 30 acres in the soil of a Michigan forest.

So I would go for B

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by diebeatsthegmat » Fri Dec 03, 2010 6:05 am
nickhar130 wrote:Scientists have recently discovered what could be the largest and oldest living organism on Earth, a giant
fungus that is an interwoven filigree of mushrooms and rootlike tentacles spawned by a single fertilized
spore some 10,000 years ago and extending for more than 30 acres in the soil of a Michigan forest.

(A) extending
(B) extends
(C) extended
(D) it extended
(E) is extending

Please help me understand the parellelism of spawned, extending.
no, i think the answer is A, because extending is parallel to spawned. it doesnt use " extended" because i think this action is still happening now, its like a naturally truth..

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by fitzgerald23 » Fri Dec 03, 2010 9:21 am
diebeatsthegmat wrote:
nickhar130 wrote:Scientists have recently discovered what could be the largest and oldest living organism on Earth, a giant
fungus that is an interwoven filigree of mushrooms and rootlike tentacles spawned by a single fertilized
spore some 10,000 years ago and extending for more than 30 acres in the soil of a Michigan forest.

(A) extending
(B) extends
(C) extended
(D) it extended
(E) is extending

Please help me understand the parellelism of spawned, extending.
no, i think the answer is A, because extending is parallel to spawned. it doesnt use " extended" because i think this action is still happening now, its like a naturally truth..
Agreed. An interwoven filigree...spawned...and extending

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by nickhar130 » Sat Dec 04, 2010 10:29 am
I'm still not understanding why spawned (past tense) is parellel to extending (present tense). Can someone elaborate for me please.

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by uwhusky » Sat Dec 04, 2010 10:56 am
nickhar130 wrote:I'm still not understanding why spawned (past tense) is parellel to extending (present tense). Can someone elaborate for me please.
These are participles:

Scientists have recently discovered what could be the largest and oldest living organism on Earth, a giant fungus that is an interwoven filigree of mushrooms and rootlike tentacles spawned by a single fertilized spore some 10,000 years ago and extending for more than 30 acres in the soil of a Michigan forest.

Both "spawned" and "extending" are parallel participle modifiers modifying the closest noun, which is "a giant fungus."

An example:

"The dog laying by the fireplace is having a wonderful nap."

"laying by the fireplace" is the participle phrase modifying "dog."

In the above case, both modifiers are used to provide more information about the giant fungus. It was "spawned" by a single pore 10,000 years ago, and it is extending to this date.
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by uwhusky » Sat Dec 04, 2010 11:04 am
pellucide wrote:
nickhar130 wrote:Scientists have recently discovered what could be the largest and oldest living organism on Earth, a giant
fungus that is an interwoven filigree of mushrooms and rootlike tentacles spawned by a single fertilized
spore some 10,000 years ago and extending for more than 30 acres in the soil of a Michigan forest.

(A) extending
(B) extends
(C) extended
(D) it extended
(E) is extending

Please help me understand the parellelism of spawned, extending.

We can restructure this huge statement into parts...
Scientists have recently discovered what could be the largest and oldest living organism on Earth,a giant fungus
that
is an interwoven filigree of mushrooms and rootlike tentacles spawned by a single fertilized spore some 10,000 years ago
and
(that) extending for more than 30 acres in the soil of a Michigan forest.

extending is incorrect if we structure it this way, because it is not parallel with that is. extends sounds better.

So it should read as...
Scientists have recently discovered what could be the largest and oldest living organism on Earth,a giant fungus
that
is an interwoven filigree of mushrooms and rootlike tentacles spawned by a single fertilized spore some 10,000 years ago
and
(that) extends for more than 30 acres in the soil of a Michigan forest.

So I would go for B
On GMAT, if I remember correctly, "that" is never omitted in a parallel structure.
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by EducationAisle » Mon Dec 06, 2010 11:08 am
nickhar130 wrote:I'm still not understanding why spawned (past tense) is parellel to extending (present tense). Can someone elaborate for me please.

As someone has rightly mentioned, the issue here is that of participles. spawned is not used as a past tense here. It is used as past participle. extending is used as present participle. Past participles and present participle are both adjective forms of the verb and are hence considered parallel.

If this sounds a lot of grammatical jargon, you would be able to identify with the following sentence:

The crumbled chair broken and ageing with each passing day, was nearing the end of its life.

broken (a Past Participle) and ageing (a Present Participle) are both modifying (describing) chair (which is a noun). Hence, broken and ageing are adjective forms (since adjectives describe nouns). In this sentence, it is more clear that broken is Past participle, since the Past tense of break is broke while Past participle is broken. And since Past participles and present participle are considered parallel structures, this sentence is correct.

Similarly, in the OG question you have posted, spawned and extending, both modify fungus. The distinction is unfortunately not very evident, since both - the Past tense and Past participle of spawn are spawned.

Now, the next logical question would be as to why C is not correct and why (in this case) extended is not parallel to spawned.

If C were to be the right choice, the sentence would read:

Scientists have recently discovered what could be the largest and oldest living organism on Earth, a giant fungus .....extended for more than 30 acres in the soil of a Michigan forest.

Do you see the issue in the sentence? Well, in this case extended is used as a past tense verb. Couple of issues with this usage:

1. Past participle (spawned) cannot be considered parallel to Past tense (extended)

2. This sentence is a run-on sentence with the following two Independent clauses not connect by a proper co-ordinating conjunction (comma is not a co-ordinating conjunction)

a. Scientists have recently discovered what could be the largest and oldest living organism on Earth

b. A giant fungus extended for more than 30 acres in the soil of a Michigan forest.

This is one of those good questions that requires a thorough understanding of principles of grammar.
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by e-GMAT » Mon Dec 06, 2010 3:49 pm
nickhar130 wrote:I'm still not understanding why spawned (past tense) is parellel to extending (present tense). Can someone elaborate for me please.
Lets first understand the sentence structure of this question:
1. Scientists have recently discovered
2. what could be the largest and oldest living organism on Earth, a giant fungus
3. that is an interwoven filigree of mushrooms and rootlike tentacles
* spawned by a single fertilized spore some 10,000 years ago
* and extending for more than 30 acres in the soil of a Michigan forest.

So as you can see, there are three modifiers for fungus
1: that is an interwoven filigree - Tells what is this fungus
2: spawned by... - Provides a characteristic
3: extending for...- Provides a characteristic

Why are 'spawned' and 'extending' parallel?
These two are parallel because of the context of the sentence. The author wants to establish two properties of fungus
1) it was spawned by single fertilized spore - This happened in the past.
2) it extends for more than 30 acres - this is true in the current time frame as well.

So this is logical parallelism. Now that we know that these have to be parallel, we can try to make them grammatically parallel by making them consistent with each other. But in this case we cannot make both verb-ed or both verb-ing modifiers since then the meaning will be distorted. Lets check that -

* fungus spawned by single...and extended for more than...
The second modifier now changes the intended meaning since it no longer implies that the fungus still extends...
* fungus spawning by single fertilized spore and extending for...
Now first modifier changes the meaning since it now implies that fungus is still in the process of spawning - which is non-sensical.

Thus, the context of this sentence requires that 'verb-ed modifier' be parallel to 'verb-ing modifier'.

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by tomada » Thu Dec 09, 2010 8:12 am
Does anyone know the OA for this question?
I'm really old, but I'll never be too old to become more educated.

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