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prashantonline
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Main clause, intensifying ........
"intensifying ..." is a modifier refers to previous clause.
expectations -> signals to use "would"
expectations of X -> X should be noun or noun phrase
expectations that X would do Y -> correct
a.) that personal spending in the July-September quarter more than doubled that of
->"that of" not required
->"doubled " incorrect
b.) that personal spending in the July-September quarter would more than double ->Correct
c.) of personal spending in the July-September quarter, that it more than doubled
->"doubled " incorrect
-> Comma before that makes the fragment
d.) of personal spending in the July-September quarter more than doubling that of
-> incorrect as explained above
e.) of personal spending in the July-September quarter, that it would more than double that of
-> incorrect as explained above
