BREAKING: Target Test Prep releases Brand New 2026 On Demand GMAT prep course

Redeem

Though perhaps less visceral and emotionally satisfying than

Expert replies
by conquistador » Fri Apr 15, 2016 7:07 am
Source: Veritas

Though perhaps less visceral and emotionally satisfying than her previous novels, "The Namesake" attests to Jhumpa Lahiri's ability to write a best seller that moves back and forth between the comic and tragic, the satirical and the intimately personal

A)that moves back and forth between the comic and tragic, the satirical and the intimately personal.

B) that moves back and forth between the comic and tragic, with the satirical and the intimately personal.

C)that has moved back and forth between the comic and tragic, and between the satirical and intimately personal.

D) moving back and forth between the comic and tragic, and the satirical and the intimately personal.

E) moving back and forth between the comic and tragic and the satirical and the intimately personal.
Join the discussion
Source: — Sentence Correction |

by chetan.sharma » Fri Apr 22, 2016 7:34 am
Mechmeera wrote:Source: Veritas

Though perhaps less visceral and emotionally satisfying than her previous novels, "The Namesake" attests to Jhumpa Lahiri's ability to write a best seller that moves back and forth between the comic and tragic, the satirical and the intimately personal

A)that moves back and forth between the comic and tragic, the satirical and the intimately personal.

B) that moves back and forth between the comic and tragic, with the satirical and the intimately personal.

C)that has moved back and forth between the comic and tragic, and between the satirical and intimately personal.

D) moving back and forth between the comic and tragic, and the satirical and the intimately personal.

E) moving back and forth between the comic and tragic and the satirical and the intimately personal.
Hi,
you have three choices startiing with THAT and two with MOVING..
the portion in the underlined portion modifies best seller and requires that..
D and E can be eliminated

Use of WITH in B makes parallelism an issue..
HAS is not proper in C

Original is correct as it is
ans A
Join the discussion

by jain2016 » Thu Apr 28, 2016 9:27 pm
Hi Experts ,

Can you please shed some light on this. I actually want to know that why we chose THAT over MOVING?

Many thanks in advance.

SJ
Join the discussion

• Page 1 of 1