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by saurabhmahajan » Mon Jul 12, 2010 10:03 pm
Hi Friends,

I justed wanted to know whether i can post essay topics which are requested by one of the top b-school on this forum.Will it be OK? if not, can i post the outline of the essay so as to get some help from you all guys to architect an essay ?
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by essaysnark » Tue Jul 13, 2010 8:06 am
EssaySnark says, sure, why not? The essay questions are public knowledge (it's not like posting GMAT questions). Maybe seeing a conversation about them can help others, too.

Of course, if this is not copacetic, EssaySnark is sure the mods will jump in.
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by saurabhmahajan » Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:32 am
Thanks essaysnark,

Please help in modelling the below essays.What points should i consider while formatting them?

1) If we were to admit one more student to the class of 2012, make a compelling argument as to why that student should be you? (300 words max)

2) What are your short term and long term goals? How will our b-school help you achieve the same? (300 words max)
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by essaysnark » Wed Jul 14, 2010 10:26 am
EssaySnark says, this link has some valid advice on these essays: https://www.thinkisb.com/blog/2010/06/04 ... -analysis/

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by pardeep_10sharma » Sun Jul 18, 2010 9:27 am
Hey man,

could u plz tell us these essays are of which B schools?
saurabhmahajan wrote:Thanks essaysnark,

Please help in modelling the below essays.What points should i consider while formatting them?

1) If we were to admit one more student to the class of 2012, make a compelling argument as to why that student should be you? (300 words max)

2) What are your short term and long term goals? How will our b-school help you achieve the same? (300 words max)

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by essaysnark » Mon Jul 19, 2010 1:16 am
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by money9111 » Mon Jul 19, 2010 9:54 am
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by saurabhmahajan » Tue Jul 20, 2010 1:28 am
Sorry for my mistake of not mentioning properly.

Well Actually i really need help in the first essay itself. i have posted second essay for other members of this forum,so that they can in advance prepare for such type of essays.

Looking for points in reference for the first essay.Friends please add your comments as to what should be the points i should add.
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by essaysnark » Tue Jul 20, 2010 12:53 pm
EssaySnark says, it's going to be tough for strangers to help you on this because, well, we don't know you!

That first essay is really an opportunity for you to express to the adcom how you're unique and how you'd make a contribution to their program. Nobody is going to be able to answer that any better than you can! At the same time though, that link that EssaySnark posted when you first asked the question, for the consultants' site focused on your target school, really offers a great methodology for how to tackle this one -- they really have laid out the steps that EssaySnark feels are valid. This is where you get to roll up your sleeves and dive in!!!
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