Satellites scrutiny

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Satellites scrutiny

by amysky_0205 » Fri Dec 07, 2012 7:15 pm
Twenty-two feet long and 10 feet in diameter, the AM-1 is one of the many new satellites that is a part of 15 years effort of subjecting the interactions of Earth's atmosphere, oceans, and land surfaces to detailed scrutiny from space.

A.satellites that is a part of 15 years effort of subjecting the interactions of Earth's atmosphere, oceans, and land surfaces

B.satellites, which is a part of a 15-year effort to subject how Earth's atmosphere, oceans, and land surfaces interact

C.satellites, part of 15 years effort of subjecting how Earth's atmosphere, oceans, and land surfaces are interacting

D.satellites that are part of an effort for 15 years that has subjected the interactions of Earth's atmosphere, oceans, and land surfaces

E.satellites that are part of a 15-year effort to subject the interactions of Earth's atmosphere, ocean, and land surfaces

OA: E

someone posted this before but the replies under seem like arguing for something..
i want to ask what's wrong with D! thank u!
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by theachiever » Fri Dec 07, 2012 8:08 pm
"D" sounds awkward and redundant.
Notice
i)"that are part of an effort for 15 years".
ii) it should not be has subjected since subject satellites is plural.
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