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Four times more likely.

by gmat_perfect » Fri Aug 13, 2010 9:58 am
According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.

(A) minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice

(B) minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing

(C) minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing

(D) it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice

(E) it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice

We know:

Four times more likely = X +4X =5X= Five times as likely as.

Four times as likely = X*4 =4X.

So, there is a difference between 5X and 4X.


Would any expert explain in detail the following question?

What is my analysis:

=> The use of "are" in A is optional. A cannot be eliminated on the basis of "are".
---> Why is B wrong?

D and E can be easily eliminated.

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by uwhusky » Fri Aug 13, 2010 10:06 am
In typing my lack of understanding to eliminate A, I thought of this question: https://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/the ... t6929.html

The usage of "in + VERB-ING" is discussed, and I think the same rule can be applied to eliminate A for this question.

B can be eliminated because the relative pronoun "who", which changes the structure of the sentence and renders it meaningless.

minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing in socioeconomically deprived areas.

The bold portion is the main clause, and you can see that it doesn't make sense.

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by tomada » Fri Aug 13, 2010 10:09 am
IMO C.
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by uwhusky » Fri Aug 13, 2010 10:14 am
Paraphrasing putting "in planning" in front for A:

"In planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates."

Now it is clear to me that A doesn't make sense and can be eliminated.

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by nazar7ft » Fri Aug 13, 2010 10:36 am
uwhusky wrote:Paraphrasing putting "in planning" in front for A:

"In planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates."

Now it is clear to me that A doesn't make sense and can be eliminated.

That is a good point. I have also understood about the option A.

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by fitzgerald23 » Fri Aug 13, 2010 10:37 am
I believe this is why B is wrong:

minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing in socioeconomically deprived areas.

Choice B really gives you no comparison. who plan on practicing refers to graduates. So the sentence basically reads minority grads are more likely than other grads.

Thats why I would chose C.

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by ankurmit » Fri Aug 13, 2010 11:19 pm
IMO C
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