SC pronoun reference doubt!..Please help..

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by dhonu121 » Wed Jun 13, 2012 8:52 pm
Recent studies suggest that an intake of vitamin E in excess of that found naturally in a balanced diet may actually increase the risk of developing certain illnesses, despite the claims of thousands of people who swear by it as a dietary supplement.
1.Recent studies suggest that an intake of vitamin E in excess of that found naturally in a balanced diet may actually increase the risk of developing certain illnesses
2.Recent studies suggest that taking vitamin E in excess of that found naturally in a balanced diet actually increases the risk of developing certain illnesses
3.Certain illnesses may be at a higher risk of development if vitamin E is taken in excess of a balanced diet, according to recent studies
4.According to recent studies, the intake of vitamin E, if in excess of that found naturally in a balanced diet, may actually increase developing certain illnesses
4.Vitamin E, recent studies suggest, if in excess of that found naturally in a balanced diet, may actually increase the development risk of certain illnesses

OA:A

I have a doubt about the underlined portion of this sentence.
What does the pronoun it refer to here ?
Is it the intake of Vitamin C ?
If this is true, then is the phrase the intake of Vitamic C the subject of the first part of the sentence ?

Can it refer to vitamin C ?

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by Kasia@EconomistGMAT » Wed Jun 13, 2012 11:09 pm
The subject of the underlined part is:
"an intake of vitamin E in excess of that found naturally in a balanced diet"

"it" refers to vitamin E

In the GMAT you are supposed to choose the best answer choice AVAILABLE. It means that the correct answer might seem flawed. However, if it is better than all the remaining answer choices, it should be selected as the right one.

Answer a is correct.
b - there is the word "taking" instead of "take", which makes this answer stylistically flawed
c - "it" is ambiguous
d - redundant because of the fragment starting with "if"
e - the phrase "the development risk" is incorrect stylistically
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by dhonu121 » Wed Jun 13, 2012 11:20 pm
Kasia@MasterGMAT wrote:The subject of the underlined part is:
"an intake of vitamin E in excess of that found naturally in a balanced diet"
Can an entire clause be a subject ?
Kasia@MasterGMAT wrote:"it" refers to vitamin E
Vitamin E is the object of a prepositional phrase. Can a pronoun refer back to a prepositional phrase as its antecedent ?
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by EducationAisle » Thu Jun 14, 2012 9:18 am
dhonu121 wrote: Can an entire clause be a subject ?
an intake of vitamin E in excess of that found naturally in a balanced diet is actually a phrase and not a clause.

dhonu121 wrote:Vitamin E is the object of a prepositional phrase. Can a pronoun refer back to a prepositional phrase as its antecedent ?
Consider #44 from OG 13:

The plot of The Bostonians centers on the rivalry that develops between Olive Chancellor, an active feminist, and Basil Ransom, her charming and cynical cousin, when they find themselves drawn to the same radiant young woman whose talent for public speaking has won her an ardent following.

they (a pronoun) refers to Olive Chancellor and Basil Ransom (Nouns that are part of the Prepositional phrase between Olive Chancellor and Basil Ransom)
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