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by satishchandra » Wed Dec 28, 2011 1:31 am
Dental caries and gingivitis can be exacerbated not only by the foods patients eat but
also by when the patients eat them
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(A) not only by the foods patients eat but also by when the patients eat them
(B) by not only the foods patients eat but also by when the patients eat them
(C) not only by the foods patients eat but also by time when the foods are eaten
(D) by not only the foods that are eaten by patients but also by the times the foods are
eaten
(E) not only by what patients eat but also by when they eat it

OA: E

What does it refer to? I picked C only because of 'it' issue in E
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by Ilana@EconomistGMAT » Wed Dec 28, 2011 3:01 am
In E, 'it' refers to 'what', or more fully to 'what patients eat'. C is incorrect because the noun 'time' lacks a definite article. Had C said 'the time', it would be fine.
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by satishchandra » Tue Jan 03, 2012 9:55 pm
Ilana@MasterGMAT wrote:In E, 'it' refers to 'what', or more fully to 'what patients eat'.
I thought this is not as good as having a proper antecedent for 'it'.
Can you provide more sentences with these type of antencedents. I am not quite familiar with them.
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by PradeepDubey » Fri Jan 06, 2012 10:16 pm
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I'd rather go for D. As, not only the parallelism is respected but also the meaning is clear. though this is the longest choice, I feel this is the only one which is correct.
What is the OA?
In choice 'E': "can be exacerbated..(skipped the middleman)..by when they eat it(refers to ? 'what patients eat'{could be singular or plural} --> whatever in place of what would have gone fit for S-V agreement )". The antecedent of it seems vague to me.
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by satishchandra » Sat Jan 07, 2012 8:56 pm
OA is E.

I have posted a PM to Ron on this link.
Lets wait to hear from the expert.
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by lunarpower » Sat Jan 07, 2012 11:23 pm
i received a private message about this thread.

the use of "it" to stand for "what patients eat" in choice (e) is definitely something that happens in normal english, but i'm not sure whether there is a precedent for it in any of gmac's problems.
to the original poster: what is the source of this problem?

also, i don't see any problems with choice (a). if the source has an answer key, i'd be interested in seeing its justification for marking (a) wrong.
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by LalaB » Sun Jan 08, 2012 5:53 am
I chose E

I feel, that in answ choice A the comparison is worse than in E.

(A) not only by the foods patients eat but also by when the patients eat them
(E) not only by what patients eat but also by when they eat it

in A "by the food" is compared with "by when". in E everything sounds better (by what/by when)

in A also "them" is ok by the meaning, but is it ok grammatically? we have two words in plural-"the foods" and "the patients".so, is the word "them" has a proper antecedent?
in E again everything sounds better. every word has its own antecedent (it=what; patients=they)
also in answ choice (A) I didnt get why the word "patients" has no article first, but later it suddenly has it.
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by satishchandra » Sun Jan 08, 2012 10:54 pm
Hi Ron,
Thank you for pitching in so quickly.
This is 238th Prob of 1000SC.
lunarpower wrote:also, i don't see any problems with choice (a). if the source has an answer key, i'd be interested in seeing its justification for marking (a) wrong.
Can you pl. explain how parallelism is maintained in 'A' ?
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by ArunangsuSahu » Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:41 pm
(A) and (E) are correct
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by lunarpower » Sun Jan 22, 2012 4:31 pm
satishchandra wrote:Hi Ron,
Thank you for pitching in so quickly.
This is 238th Prob of 1000SC.
lunarpower wrote:also, i don't see any problems with choice (a). if the source has an answer key, i'd be interested in seeing its justification for marking (a) wrong.
Can you pl. explain how parallelism is maintained in 'A' ?
i guess it's not as good as the parallelism in choice (e), but it certainly doesn't seem wrong enough to be the basis for elimination.
Ron has been teaching various standardized tests for 20 years.

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