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by aj5105 » Sat May 30, 2009 8:04 pm
Marconi’s conception of the radio was as a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation; instead, it is precisely the opposite, a tool for communicating with a large, public audience.

A.Marconi’s conception of the radio was as a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation; instead, it is

B.Marconi conceived of the radio as a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation, but which is

C.Marconi conceived of the radio as a tool for private conversation that could substitute for the telephone; instead, it has become

D.Marconi conceived of the radio to be a tool for private conversation, a substitute for the telephone, which has become

E.Marconi conceived of the radio to be a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation, other than what it is,
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by nervesofsteel » Sat May 30, 2009 11:44 pm
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by pratikgandhi » Sun May 31, 2009 1:43 am
IMO C

A says Marconi's conception ... was a substitute for telephone >Incorrect
B & D are using "which" incorrectly.
Between C and E, C sounds better
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