BREAKING: Target Test Prep releases Brand New 2026 On Demand GMAT prep course

Redeem

Target Test Prep · GMAT

Choose how you want to prepare

Learn live with an expert or move at your own pace. Every option includes the complete TTP study system.

★★★★★5.0559 reviews
GMATBootcamp Starts Sep 21
Chris Peckover, Target Test Prep GMAT expert
LIVE ONLINE BOOTCAMP

Live Online Bootcamp Class with Top GMAT Expert Chris Peckover

Sep 21 to Oct 9, 2026

Schedule
Mon to Fri · 7:00 to 10:00 PM ET
Included
Live classes + 6 months of TTP OnDemand
  • Boost your GMAT score in less than one month in a live online class
  • 6 months access to TTP OnDemand video courses included
View bootcamp & enroll
Limited cohort · enrollment openTarget Test Prep
EALiveTeach 5 seats left
Logan Thompson
EXECUTIVE ASSESSMENT

Sep 6 to Dec 6, 2026

with Logan Thompson

Schedule
Sun · 9:30 AM to 12:30 PM ET
Included
40 hours of live online classes plus six months of access to the complete TTP EA OnDemand course.
  • 165+ EA Score Guarantee
  • 4,100+ Quant, Verbal, and Integrated Reasoning practice questions
  • 400+ hours of in-depth video lessons
  • 3,000+ step-by-step video solutions
View EA class & enroll
Limited cohort · enrollment openTarget Test Prep
GMATOnDemand Start anytime
SELF-PACED MASTERCLASS

Target Test Prep GMAT OnDemand

Complete access from day one. Study on your schedule.

715+ score guarantee
$0to start then $127/mo
  • Personalized study plan and analytics
  • Thousands of lessons and practice questions

Compare the format, schedule, and included access before enrolling. Prices and seat counts shown reflect the supplied offer details.

Argument essay please rate: Art museum

Expert replies

Score

6
1
100%
5
0
No votes
4
0
No votes
3
0
No votes
2
0
No votes
1
0
No votes
 
Total votes: 1

by antest07 » Wed May 27, 2009 11:44 pm
The following appeared in a memorandum issued by a large city's council on the arts.
“In a recent citywide poll, fifteen percent more residents said that they watch television programs about the visual arts than was the case in a poll conducted five years ago. During these past five years, the number of people visiting our city's art museums has increased by a similar percentage. Since the corporate funding that supports public television, where most of the visual arts programs appear, is now being threatened with severe cuts, we can expect that attendance at our city's art museums will also start to decrease. Thus some of the city's funds for supporting the arts should be reallocated to public television.”


The author of this topic states that the cut in television funding will decrease the attendance at art museums. While the author does address a problem for the management of museum, the logic of his arguments and the conclusion he reaches are fundamentally flawed. He does not consider various factors that affect the attendance of art museums.

To begin with, the author falsely considers that the increase in number of visitors in museum attributes to television programs. Besides television, there are many medias that can convey information to their audiences. In reality, many successful business organizations advertise through internet, radio and banner in public places at large. For instance, promotion and discount notice can be easily obtained through many media channel such as emails and newspapers.

Moreover, quality of visual arts is a crucial factor in attracting visitors. It is obvious that quality of arts in five year ago cannot be compared to those in nowadays. Even visual arts without much advertising but with high quality can attract many people to take a look at it. The prevalence of education in nowadays is totally different from the past. More people are getting educated and are more likely to pay a visit to the museum.

Last but not least, the result of city poll is doubtful. With only fifteen percent of all residents said they got information about visual arts from the television, I suspect not many of them would go to the museum. A more accurate way to conduct the poll is to include a question such as "Will you go to the museum?" in the ballot.

For the reasons stated above, the author’s argument simply does not hold up. If one truly wants to boost up the attendance of the museum, he should conduct a more thorough investigation on the factors affecting the attendance.
Join the discussion
Source: — GMAT Essays (AWA) |

• Page 1 of 1