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by Gmat09_5ALL » Wed Sep 30, 2009 9:22 pm
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Floating in the waters of the equatorial Pacific, an array of buoys collects and transmits data on long-term interactions between the ocean and the atmosphere, interactions that affect global climate.
A. atmosphere, interactions that affect
B. atmosphere, with interactions affecting
C. atmosphere that affects
D. atmosphere that is affecting
E. atmosphere as affects

IMO - D
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by sunnyjohn » Wed Sep 30, 2009 11:07 pm
IMO:A

an AOB collects and transmits data on interaction b/w X and Y, --> Question say a modifier for 'interaction'.

B. atmosphere, with interactions affecting

--> with changing the meaning, mean to say that it also transmit data of some other interaction.

C. atmosphere that affects --> that seems to modify atmosphere

D. atmosphere that is affecting --> that seems to modify atmosphere

E. atmosphere as affects ---> as is use for example or comparison ...we dont need as here.

Wat is OA?
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by xcusemeplz2009 » Thu Oct 01, 2009 1:48 am
IMO A

B. atmosphere, with interactions affecting
(preposition+noun+participle form....wrong in GMAT)
C. atmosphere that affects (THAT modifies atmoshphere)
D. atmosphere that is affecting (same as in D)
E. atmosphere as affects(as is not require)
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by gmatv09 » Thu Oct 01, 2009 8:23 am
IMO A
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by hypermeganet » Thu Oct 01, 2009 12:56 pm
Definitely A.
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by dare2dream » Thu Oct 01, 2009 9:16 pm
IMO A.
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by Gmat09_5ALL » Fri Oct 02, 2009 2:37 am
Thanks Everyone. OA is A.
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