Modifier problem and parallelism

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Modifier problem and parallelism

by ashg84 » Fri Oct 12, 2012 5:50 am
Researchers have announced that the magnetic fields emitted by one manufacturer's security surveillance system, of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, can interfere with pacemakers and that this interactions can bring on missed or irregular heartbeats, nausea, breathlessness, dizziness, and even fainting.

a) same
b) of which, worldwide, there are 200000 of that type, and which can interfere with pacemakers, and
c) 200000 of which type exist worldwide, interfering with pacemakers, and
d) 200,000 of that type exist worldwide and can interfere with pacemakers, and

I picked choice A as it is parallel and with no error compared with other choice.

Please suggest which should be the write answer..
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by Jim@StratusPrep » Fri Oct 12, 2012 6:18 am
A is the best given the choices. What is the source of this question? The grammatical structure is not great in general...
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by ashg84 » Fri Oct 12, 2012 7:47 am
Jim@StratusPrep wrote:A is the best given the choices. What is the source of this question? The grammatical structure is not great in general...
Jim, the question is from my coaching institute course material..
I picked choice A from the given choices..

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