Question

This topic has expert replies
Source: — Sentence Correction |

Senior | Next Rank: 100 Posts
Posts: 52
Joined: Thu Jul 23, 2009 2:44 pm
Location: Irvine, CA
Thanked: 1 times

by georgeung » Fri Aug 07, 2009 11:38 am
The sentence starts out with "one" and so everything in the sentence has to corresponds to the singular subject.

The commas break up the sentence to make it look like it should have started another sentence, but "had" is the verb for "one." B makes it a run on sentence.

Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts
Posts: 191
Joined: Sat Feb 14, 2009 11:56 am
Thanked: 1 times

by ST » Fri Aug 07, 2009 11:40 am
Thank you. Make sense now.

• Page 1 of 1