BREAKING: Target Test Prep releases Brand New 2026 On Demand GMAT prep course

Redeem

Need help with OA

Expert replies
by hetavdave » Thu May 28, 2009 9:43 am
230. Critics of the trend toward privately operated prisons consider corrections facilities to be an integral part of the criminal justice system and question if profits should be made from incarceration.
(A) to be an integral part of the criminal justice system and question if
(B) as an integral part of the criminal justice system and they question if
(C) as being an integral part of the criminal justice system and question whether
(D) an integral part of the criminal justice system and question whether
(E) are an integral part of the criminal justice system, and they question whether

OA d
Can anyone please explain me the OA. I was thinking B :(
Join the discussion
Source: — Sentence Correction |

by tdadic84 » Thu May 28, 2009 9:49 am
hey,

consider ...as.... this is not the correct idiom...

consider ...to be..is also wrong

therefore...you are left with D and E...

between D and E...D clearly wins...E uses they...
Join the discussion

IMO

by kc_raj » Thu May 28, 2009 3:30 pm
IMO D

Cosider correction facilities an integral part

consider x y Idiom correctly used,
Join the discussion

by nh_cryptic » Wed May 23, 2012 8:15 am
IMO D ....
Join the discussion

by alex.gellatly » Wed May 23, 2012 7:46 pm
hetavdave wrote:230. Critics of the trend toward privately operated prisons consider corrections facilities to be an integral part of the criminal justice system and question if profits should be made from incarceration.
(A) to be an integral part of the criminal justice system and question if
(B) as an integral part of the criminal justice system and they question if
(C) as being an integral part of the criminal justice system and question whether
(D) an integral part of the criminal justice system and question whether
(E) are an integral part of the criminal justice system, and they question whether

OA d
Can anyone please explain me the OA. I was thinking B :(
There are two problems with B. 1) The usage of they. We don't know what they refers to here. Does they refer to critics or facilities? It's not clear, therefore it's wrong.
2) The usage of if. We should use weather on statements like this. It depends on whether (not if)... or I question whether (not if). Use "if" in the conditionals. For example, If I were president I would create better policies. Or if it rains tomorrow, I will stay at home.

We can eliminate A and B because of if
We can eliminate C because of being
We can eliminate e because of they.

So we are only left with D, which is correct.
Hope this helps
Join the discussion

• Page 1 of 1