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by hemanth28 » Sun Jun 21, 2009 12:45 am
Spanning more than fifty years, Friedrich Miiller began his career in an unpromising apprenticeship as a
Sanskrit scholar and culminated in virtually every honor that European governments and learned societies
could bestow.

(A) Miiller began his career in an unpromising apprenticeship as
(B) Miiller's career began in an unpromising apprenticeship as
(C) Miiller's career began with the unpromising apprenticeship of being
(D) Miiller had begun his career with the unpromising apprenticeship of being
(E) the career of Miiller has begun with an unpromising apprenticeship of


whats wrong with C ??
A is having modifier error.D,E are out for the wrong tense usage. I thought began with is more idiomatic than began in. So i choose C even though this option is verbose.
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by maihuna » Sun Jun 21, 2009 1:12 am
couple of points: being is almost always wrong as it is passive i nature...

as is correct conjunction to show capacity....
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by hemanth28 » Sun Jun 21, 2009 6:36 am
maihuna wrote:couple of points: being is almost always wrong as it is passive i nature...

as is correct conjunction to show capacity....
I understand that being is less preferred , however "apprenticeship as" sounds weird to me. That is the reason why i chose C.

Also can you give some other examples where began in is used ?
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by maihuna » Sun Jun 21, 2009 8:04 am
there could be several, see below:
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Actress's journey to the Tonys began in Norfolk.
Jim's commitment in the provincial prison began in 1934.
Their romance began in middle school.
Horror films began in the 1930’s with the release of Dracula and Frankenstein.
Somalia Piracy Began in Response to Illegal Fishing and Toxic Dumping by Western Ships off Somali Coast.
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Re: Friedrich Miiller

by BlindVision » Mon Jun 22, 2009 1:01 am
hemanth28 wrote:Spanning more than fifty years, Friedrich Miiller began his career in an unpromising apprenticeship as a
Sanskrit scholar and culminated in virtually every honor that European governments and learned societies
could bestow.

(A) Miiller began his career in an unpromising apprenticeship as
(B) Miiller's career began in an unpromising apprenticeship as
(C) Miiller's career began with the unpromising apprenticeship of being
(D) Miiller had begun his career with the unpromising apprenticeship of being
(E) the career of Miiller has begun with an unpromising apprenticeship of


whats wrong with C ??
A is having modifier error.D,E are out for the wrong tense usage. I thought began with is more idiomatic than began in. So i choose C even though this option is verbose.
IMO=B

Spanning more than fifty years, is referring to Miller's career, not the man Friedrich Miller. The idiom began in is correct than begin with.
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by pops » Mon Jun 22, 2009 1:15 am
IMO : B

being is almost everytime incorrect in GMAT.
also there is no problem with: 'apprenticeship as a sanskrit scholar'
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by kifflai » Mon Jun 22, 2009 6:09 am
I vote for B.
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