Seems okay to me.

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Seems okay to me.

by elias.latour.apex » Thu Apr 27, 2017 7:28 am
I see no problem with the credited response. A sentence such as:

John is a better worker than Mary, for/because she arrives late while/whereas he comes in early.

The meaning is clear. No words are wasted. There is no ambiguity.
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