1000 Sc : sentence formation?

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1000 Sc : sentence formation?

by dextar » Wed Mar 12, 2008 9:12 pm
17. A patient accusing a doctor of malpractice will find it difficult to prove damage if there is a lack of some other doctor to testify about proper medical procedures.
(A) if there is a lack of some other doctor to testify
(B) unless there will be another doctor to testify
(C) without another doctor’s testimony
(D) should there be no testimony from some other doctor
(E) lacking another doctor to testify


Here is there any problem with the senternce formation of option D?
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Re: 1000 Sc : sentence formation?

by camitava » Wed Mar 12, 2008 9:51 pm
dextar wrote:17. A patient accusing a doctor of malpractice will find it difficult to prove damage if there is a lack of some other doctor to testify about proper medical procedures.
(A) if there is a lack of some other doctor to testify
(B) unless there will be another doctor to testify
(C) without another doctor’s testimony
(D) should there be no testimony from some other doctor
(E) lacking another doctor to testify


Here is there any problem with the senternce formation of option D?
Dextar, in GMAT, they generally look for a simple and the best solution. If u think in that way, option - C suits the best. Now with D, is it not too much wordy and I think, this is also changing the meaning of the sentence. Above all, it is not making any sense at all! Am I clear to u, Dextar?
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Re: 1000 Sc : sentence formation?

by lunarpower » Thu Mar 13, 2008 2:29 am
camitava wrote:
dextar wrote:17. A patient accusing a doctor of malpractice will find it difficult to prove damage if there is a lack of some other doctor to testify about proper medical procedures.
(A) if there is a lack of some other doctor to testify
(B) unless there will be another doctor to testify
(C) without another doctor’s testimony
(D) should there be no testimony from some other doctor
(E) lacking another doctor to testify


Here is there any problem with the senternce formation of option D?
Dextar, in GMAT, they generally look for a simple and the best solution. If u think in that way, option - C suits the best. Now with D, is it not too much wordy and I think, this is also changing the meaning of the sentence. Above all, it is not making any sense at all! Am I clear to u, Dextar?
you are correct about which choices are right and wrong.

however, the issue between choices c and d is one of pure wordiness. c is concise and clear, whereas d is extremely wordy and a bit opaque (although it doesn't change the meaning of the sentence).

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i do have one big problem with this question, though: it relies on changing the original meaning of the sentence. the original meaning - which was not nonsense that had to be changed - involved a lack of doctors, while the correct answer choice involves a lack of testimony. importantly, the gmat doesn't really do this: it usually requires you to stick to the meaning of the original sentence, unless that meaning happens to be self-contradictory, ambiguous, or nonsensical (none of which is the case in choice a here).
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by camitava » Thu Mar 13, 2008 3:27 am
Ron,
After going thru ur post, I noticed the point that the meaning of the sentence is getting changed anyhow. The sentence in the Qs is saying about the lack of some doctors while the OA is saying about the lack of testimony prescribed by other doctors.
Sorry for my comment! I am ready to withdraw my stmt -
I think, this is also changing the meaning of the sentence.
Correct me If I am wrong


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by OnapiIndia » Sat Mar 29, 2008 3:25 am
C suits here.

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by richardwang6430 » Thu Apr 17, 2008 1:38 am
I will D, instead.

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by Buzz » Thu Sep 25, 2008 5:42 pm
Can someone please explain why B is not correct ?

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by NSNguyen » Sun Sep 28, 2008 7:08 am
IMO: B
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by afterhours » Sun Sep 28, 2008 8:13 am
OA?

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by Buzz » Sun Sep 28, 2008 3:28 pm
Is there any particular condition under which we can or can't use "Lack of"?

e.g

Lack of doctors
Lack of Medical Procedures

Are both correct ?

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by eshahid » Sun Sep 28, 2008 10:22 pm
C seems concise and clear.

all other choices look unnecessarily wordy.
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by samirnajeeb » Fri May 22, 2009 3:13 am
whats wrong with B ... i wouldnt pick B .. but still i want to know what is wrong with it.

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by tashu » Sun Jun 14, 2009 4:26 am
I think "There will be " is wordy in B.

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by vinayakdl » Sun Jun 14, 2009 6:59 am
samirnajeeb wrote:whats wrong with B ... i wouldnt pick B .. but still i want to know what is wrong with it.
isn't "unless there will be" in different tense than the original sentence (sounds more future tense)?

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by Domnu » Sun Jun 14, 2009 5:26 pm
Choice B is incorrect since the future tense isn't to be used here.
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